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ShuraZero
ShuraZeroLv211mth
2024-03-20 03:42

Anteriormente dejé una reseña negativa en otra obra de éste autor, sin embargo en cuanto a éste fanfic para mí es una buena historia, me gusta la interacción que tiene el protagonista con kumoo, algo que corregiría es que debes hacer que ella sea más fuerte porque el progreso que está haciendo el protagonista es a través de los monstruos que kumo debió cazar, así provocando que ella no se vuelva fuerte y no pueda evolucionar

Kumo desu ga, Nani ka? - Edit System

ParodyGirl
4.7
80 Chs

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Shameless author here. About this story, I really like Kumo desu ga and decided to write a fanfic. It probably won't be to everyone's taste, but I hope many people like it. The story will focus on adventure, character interaction and evolution, especially at the beginning. I haven't decided if I'll write "Lemons" yet, but maybe I will in the future. Thanks for reading!

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a true rare gem. a perfect romance in every aspect. the author really has talent. one of the best romances on the platform.🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩✨🤩🤩🤩✨✨✨🤩✨🤩✨✨🤩🤩✨🤩🤩✨✨🤩🤩✨✨✨🤩🤩🤩✨✨

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