Overall, the story is good, but the whole power scale balancing is completely off. The farther you get into the story the less words are written, and a lot of the chapters are just a scenario being described from multiple points of view, or just filler text that takes up the whole chapter. Also at the latest chapter, the main character has already reached a point where he may be considered unrivaled. Even if he does go lower into the labyrinth by the time he gets there, he’ll be way stronger than he is now. For those who don’t know or a first time readers, he has the ability to boost his own stats, at this point in the story he can edit his stats all the way up to 50,000. And if I remember correctly the stat limit is 150,000. This means there’s nothing that can truly hinder him in the dungeon since his growth rate is so fast. another thing that bothers me about the story is that he constantly makes choices that are either stupid or contradicting what he just said. One such example of this is when he saw the mother spider and he said I better run away while she’s doesn’t know I’m here and two sentences later he’s engaged in battle with her, and somehow he wins. The mother spider in question seems to not be a good fighter, even though it is lived for so long and has reached level 89. I would continue this review, but I truly held anyone’s attention for this long
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A good review. I also think I shouldn't have let him get so strong so quickly.
Will you edit or redo the story then?
At the moment I think it's impossible to do that. But I don't intend to extend the story too much because of that.
I got a few more complaints that I would like to post here, although the MC has apparently watched the show or read the novel, she tends to forget about import skills, such as heresy notification to keep him sane. And at some points in the story, it seems like he’s purposefully putting himself in danger, and not prioritizing his own survival.
