Review Detail of Taragorm in Robert Crow in the world of magic.
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The mc ruins this for me. Kinda want to punch him straight in the face. However this is only my personal opinion as i dislike weak and stupid mcs. Especially when theres no clear advantage he will have to make him less stupid and weak. Now the good, this is interesting not seen this set up before, writings spot on, good dailogue and finaly good descriptive writing. felt immersed
Robert Crow in the world of magic.
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Its a fine line between being comedic and being irratable, which mostly relys on the taste of the viewer/reader and i'm a miserable sod. Wish you all the best, you have really good writing skills.
ShinXResolve:Thank you for your review. Hopefully you'll continue reading and see that the MC isn't as feeble as you think. As for stupid it's hard to say. I rather think he is more comical than most. See tou next time
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