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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm17d
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    Really liked this fanfic. Chaos gods, too soon im out.

    "We have so much to talk about and so little time to speak. So I will only say this my little angel... the game has changed."
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    Son of Sanguine: Corvinius
    Anime & Comics · Corum_4752
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm1mth
    Commented

    Newfound knowledge and determination this screams chat gpt

    With a clear plan in mind, Nigel made his decision. "First, I'll focus on improving my physical stats and mastering mind arts." The journey ahead promised challenges, but with his newfound knowledge and determination, Nigel was ready to face them head-on.
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    Harry Potter. A Black Prodigy
    Movies · Mr_Myeterious
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm1mth
    Commented
    'Then my wand might be … hard!'
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    HP: Bad Intentions
    Movies · Max1mus
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm1mth
    Commented

    ?????????????

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    being an original in Westeros
    Movies · Kingoffrogs
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm1mth
    Commented

    This is a rewrite. This is barely readable with Grammar mistakes and just straight up wrong words. Feels like im reading a methed out yodas dairy.

    Ch 1 the void/ reborn in the far north( rewrite)
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    being an original in Westeros
    Movies · Kingoffrogs
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm1mth
    Posted

    Mc grows old real fast you can have the best story in the world but if the mcs just a straight up adhd brainless angry prick it makes it unreadable snape with wolf zoan powers what a goddam waste of a good idea

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    HP: The Big Bad Wolf
    Book&Literature · Ikaru5
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm1mth
    Commented

    Mc gonna get himself an haskill

    The house elf was currently dealing with the rather odd side effect of Nick becoming a realm lord. The magical bond between them had caused the house elf to start a sort of evolution in an unknown direction. As a result the pitiful creature was pretty much bedridden for the time being as the dense mana on the island helped nourish its changing anatomy. Which direction this change was heading Nick had no clue but it should be interesting at least.
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    Harry potter: The ringmaker
    Book&Literature · loskro
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm1mth
    Commented

    Kabuto bloody took me second ffs

    Shizune, who served as Orochimaru's assistant, must have exceptional medical ninjutsu skills.
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    Marvel: Play as Naruto at the beginning
    Movies · JiangJuShi
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm2mth
    Commented

    Yeah.............nope. Im out

    Ch 20 Chapter 20: “The Path Unchosen”
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    Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian
    Book&Literature · TalesByJaz
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm2mth
    Commented

    This is an unfortunate translation right here.......

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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm2mth
    Commented

    The f is happening from this point forward feels like a chunk missing

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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm3mth
    Replied to Mystic_Verse

    Just the style of writting and common phrases i see all the time in ai. E.g exploring, explore, a sense of ________. plus being super insular. it just feels a.i not saying it is author just feels like it. Not that i care too much some good gpt stuff out there.

    Ch 19 Ambitions
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    Harry Potter: No More Simping
    Book&Literature · Mystic_Verse
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm3mth
    Commented

    this chapter screams A.I.

    Ch 19 Ambitions
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    Harry Potter: No More Simping
    Book&Literature · Mystic_Verse
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm3mth
    Commented

    My fist in ya face if its something stupid after this build up

    Next chapter from 'that' s POV. Guess 'that'.
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    Reincarnated In HP world with Power of Destruction
    Book&Literature · Agwinz
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm3mth
    Commented

    Im dropping full of angst fookin hate it.. If i want to be depressed i will come back and read again.

    Ch 43 return to Hogwarts
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    Harry Potter : twin of the boy who survived
    Movies · DaoistewNoKO
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm3mth
    Replied to White_Wolf_7506

    Anticipation, with determination, are redflags for ai involvement for me

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Essence
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    Playing With Magic
    Movies · Lightest_Reader
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm3mth
    Replied to ShinXResolve

    Its a fine line between being comedic and being irratable, which mostly relys on the taste of the viewer/reader and i'm a miserable sod. Wish you all the best, you have really good writing skills.

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    Robert Crow in the world of magic.
    Book&Literature · ShinXResolve
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm3mth
    Posted

    The mc ruins this for me. Kinda want to punch him straight in the face. However this is only my personal opinion as i dislike weak and stupid mcs. Especially when theres no clear advantage he will have to make him less stupid and weak. Now the good, this is interesting not seen this set up before, writings spot on, good dailogue and finaly good descriptive writing. felt immersed

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    Robert Crow in the world of magic.
    Book&Literature · ShinXResolve
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm3mth
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    A Summoner in the Wizarding World
    Book&Literature · OrzBeta
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  • Taragorm
    Taragorm3mth
    Replied to ArdaPendragon

    Its part of the process to leave wont matter much to the mc i suspect he will forfeit one of the two he has and just make another

    Ch 78 Chapter 75: Resignation
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    Star Wars: Scion Of The Sun
    Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
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