Review Detail of Jeffery_XXVI in MMORPG: Visceral Online

Shameless Author here with a 5-star review. while I’m fully aware my book isn’t perfect. I still think there’s a myriad of pretty good qualities and I hope you all can see that too one day. The overarching and complete plot of the book has already been laid out but how I get there can still be influenced by the readers, With this book, I tried doing something different, creating a unique power system so each fight would feel intriguing and different it's hard to know if I succeeded at that so please be sure to drop a comment. I believe my characters are well written and well fleshed out, I’ll use some tropes here and there but I mostly want my characters to feel like humans you can see in the real world, with decisions anyone could get behind. But still, it's a novel hence exaggeration. I’ve always prided myself on writing good villains, so this will be another time to show it. The Hunting Dogs faction are the main villains of the book however there might be someone behind them, looming in the night like a red moon. My action scenes could be better and so could my dialogue so I hope I get better as you all read and maybe I’ll see a comment that says. “The author is actually improving.” And I’ll smile for the entire day. However, until then, I hope you have fun with this small creation of mine and hopefully one day it won't be so small anymore.