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Arubion_GamingLv17mth
2024-07-25 16:09

As a story it has plenty of lore and flow, it may jump a bit weirdly and come off a bit sluggish. But my main issue is the grammar and choice of words making it feel what could be an amazing story clunky. The main character does seem to brown nose a bit to much, but otherwise a refreshing dynamic.

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