To early to give it a full review but as far as the first chapter it was a fun read gonna hope a new chapter comes out soon I can't really see any problems with it so far. Even if it's only the first chapter so far. You should atleast read that there's a good chance you'll like it.
Magn0lia
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LIKEThanks for the review. I actually rewrote it and I scheduled the rewrite to come out on the 18th. I plan on doing regular updates and have already begun the second chapter. I look forward to seeing what you think about this one.
I_am_blade:first review go's to me. W.