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Buay_ButlerLv148mth
2024-07-03 10:29

No harem=No read !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I created my own system

LAZYHEAD
4.1
312 Chs

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Fool_KingLv13

I can tell ur a virgin

7mth
19
Lecteur_omniscientLv1

Ok suppose you are reincarnated in a world of culture and you will be op in this world it is the law of the strongest or with your system you will necessarily become strong....so you will just focus on a girl 😳 if you say yes know that you are stupid.....

Fool_King:I can tell ur a virgin
6mth
1
Fool_KingLv13

No I wouldn’t focus on girls I’d focus on getting power. Why would I need a harem if I could just go to a brothel and get better looking women without offending a young master.

Lecteur_omniscient:Ok suppose you are reincarnated in a world of culture and you will be op in this world it is the law of the strongest or with your system you will necessarily become strong....so you will just focus on a girl 😳 if you say yes know that you are stupid.....
6mth
7
Lecteur_omniscientLv1

I don't refuse but suppose you become immortal where you become a god what is the use of power if you are alone with no one to talk to normally or have fun that's why they say during a trip the most important it's not the destination but the path, you only live once...keep that in mind if you ever reincarnate in a fantastic world or culture

Fool_King:No I wouldn’t focus on girls I’d focus on getting power. Why would I need a harem if I could just go to a brothel and get better looking women without offending a young master.
6mth
1
Fool_KingLv13

Tru ig but I’d prefer 1 women that is strong and loving instead of like 6.

Lecteur_omniscient:I don't refuse but suppose you become immortal where you become a god what is the use of power if you are alone with no one to talk to normally or have fun that's why they say during a trip the most important it's not the destination but the path, you only live once...keep that in mind if you ever reincarnate in a fantastic world or culture
6mth
11
Fool_KingLv13

We just got diff opinions 🤷

Lecteur_omniscient:I don't refuse but suppose you become immortal where you become a god what is the use of power if you are alone with no one to talk to normally or have fun that's why they say during a trip the most important it's not the destination but the path, you only live once...keep that in mind if you ever reincarnate in a fantastic world or culture
6mth
3
Lecteur_omniscientLv1

I didn't talk about 6 boss 2 to 3 is good

Lecteur_omniscient:I don't refuse but suppose you become immortal where you become a god what is the use of power if you are alone with no one to talk to normally or have fun that's why they say during a trip the most important it's not the destination but the path, you only live once...keep that in mind if you ever reincarnate in a fantastic world or culture
6mth
3
LetMeCookLv3

Sorry to say, but your way of thinking is just well, alarming. You get reincarnated in a world where you are OP with magic and shit and your first thought is to get girls? Really?!...

Lecteur_omniscient:I didn't talk about 6 boss 2 to 3 is good
6mth
9
sennunLv13

Because he is a loser and never had a girlfriend in his previous life.

LetMeCook:Sorry to say, but your way of thinking is just well, alarming. You get reincarnated in a world where you are OP with magic and shit and your first thought is to get girls? Really?!...
6mth
8
Sudhanshu_Pandey_0429Lv4

I don't know these retards above me are yapping about but why are they giving an ultimatum? you can be both OP and have girls.... no one is forcing you to be one of the above smh

5mth
5
Daoist7EdrqgLv1

It is harem = No read !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4mth
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WeavedSlaveLv2

In summary, this is a story of a thirteen year old boy who created something (which I think is a system) in a secret library, and with the goal of becoming stronger using the system he created. Strengths of the story are simple-straightforward language, simplicity of author's tone and slightly meaningful story development. Weaknesses includes the misuse of punctuation marks, extremely slow pacing, and the lack of proper characterization. While reading it, I don't feel thrilled nor can I find strong suspense but nonetheless, it's readable. In my opinion, there are a lot of things to correct. Really. I recommend it to all youngsters around the world.

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LAZYHEADAuthor

And here is the author's shameless review, To start off I'll write the story's weaknesses. Honestly, this novel has so many grammatical errors I am thankful that many readers still take time to read it. I am thankful because the readers are kind enough to point out my mistakes. I would often read my novel to check, but somehow whenever I do my brain automatically corrects the errors, making me unable to see them since I read them correctly. The pacing is a bit slow and sometimes you can read the transition being wrong. I am working on it but thank you for still reading. The Main character is still a kid so please have patience with his decisions if they seem a bit inappropriate. He will improve but please don't stop commending for suggestions since I am considering listening to my reader's suggestion. That's all for now please do add more if I miss anything, thank you As for the strength please start reading and write them here.

4mth
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mo_86Lv13

I have read many books of the same genre, but i got to say that this one feels very new again. I love the world building and the cohesion of old and new. Looking forward to the next chapters!

11mth
6
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Captain_SadisticLv3

Only read chapters one to four at the moment I'm writing the review. I'll be honest It looks like the story has potential but it feels a little slow. A little better writing style and a faster pace should help boost the quality of your story. Keep it up. Good luck.

11mth
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REFOLv13

its messed up .... the Idea is great but the delivery is trashy ...

8mth
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thehumanbeingLv1

Very bland concept. Once again, I don't give out many reviews but this one the authors gotta know his shortcomings. And personally I don't like harem so I'm sorry author. Was trying out new novels but this one was a bit lacking in world background. The story has potential.

1yr
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Eman_xLv1

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DraconicWulfLv15

Reveal spoiler

4mth
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MartikusLv13

Premise was pretty great, but I had a very hard time reading it. The tense was not always correct, and it was pretty hard to read.

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