Will the ml’s ever do stuff with each other in 3/4somes or do they just touch the fl?

only fl, lol, jealousy would already be there, why would they do those things?

hope you read it and like it . I'll edit the starting chapters again as some of them have mistakes so sorry for them.

You replied to my comment on a different series but I never saw it. Can you answer it here please? I am open to different types of series. As long as I enjoy it. And the author enjoys writing it.

probably wn doing its thing lol. well, I just wrote that I'm fine with other things but I just can't write y.o.a.i and .n.t.r stuff, aside from these two if you have any suggestions you can give

Okay. What is your opinion on the traps element? They could be interesting for dialogue with the FMC for various things.

Along with special dialogue with the other male harem members.

that's actually an idea I was considering but was hesitant because of y.o.a.i stuff. So if I write it I'll probably write it for fl only. though it could be fun if he's in the harem lol

yeah, sounds interesting.

I didn't see the reply.... again. ugh.

weird lol, well I have seen and read many things that I don't find that weird about what you said lol. so how about it? gonna give it a try?

Since it is very new. Sure. New enough to save money on the privilege. And paying for chapters. But I will wait for a bit. Gotta wait for some other series to do certain things in them. I have been recommended multiple series as well. By good friends. And life stuff going on. But I am keeping this in my library to keep an eye on it. Just have fun writing this series. Since you said you were writing for the fun of it. Ignore any hate but remember the constructive criticism.

yup yup, I'll definitely remember that. thanks for your advice and probably reading it.

One last piece of advice. Delete the reviews that do nothing but say hateful things. Delete the reviews that are also under four stars. It is the only way to keep the auto recommendations advertising your series in a positive way. Even if they may sound positive. Delete the positive star reviews that bash what you write. The biggest mistake that writers make is keeping these reviews up.

gotacha, I'll remember it well. thanks for these advices

how large are you planning for the harem to be ?

it won't be big, around 6-7 maybe

I understand deleting hateful reviews but I think it's kinda untruthful to delete anything under 4 stars. what's the point of the rating system then?

The only way for the author to get the advertisement that they need is to be just like the others on here. Anything that has less than four stars is barely advertised. Especially with how toxic this place can be.

Are the only chapters with spicy content the only two that it shows in the beginning? Referring to the one with eighteen at the end of the chapters. Or are there other chapters that have that content in them later without the eighteen at the end of it? I am about to start reading the series. Just curious 🧐. I sent that gift as motivation for you.