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2024-10-01 03:49

the novel is good until it reach the romances part like why did the author even had romances and also had heart break to it I don't understand it is better not to had romances and focus on other things. just because there are two females lead and author does not want to write harem author decided to make one of the the female lead cheat on him with his friend this is basically ntr.

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Sphire1707
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It's funny that you assume that I made Sofia break Jason's heart because I didn't want to make a harem story. This is the problem with readers who think they are smart enough to guess an author's intentions just because they've seen something like this before in other novels. It's just a tag brother, I can do whatever I want since it's my book, and making a harem isn't impossible if I really wanted to do it. Bruh, Adele wasn't even a love interest until like 20 chapters ago... and even now, it's a shaky topic. I appreciate your review but don't try to guess my intentions, you have no idea what I think of or plan for my story.

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Ntr 🤢🤮

Sphire1707:It's funny that you assume that I made Sofia break Jason's heart because I didn't want to make a harem story. This is the problem with readers who think they are smart enough to guess an author's intentions just because they've seen something like this before in other novels. It's just a tag brother, I can do whatever I want since it's my book, and making a harem isn't impossible if I really wanted to do it. Bruh, Adele wasn't even a love interest until like 20 chapters ago... and even now, it's a shaky topic. I appreciate your review but don't try to guess my intentions, you have no idea what I think of or plan for my story.
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