Saurfangs

nope I'm out

Calm down, don't be emotional. Read what I wrote carefully and recheck your reply I never said he was supposed to be a beast all I said was duke hyou is a beast type or an instinct type general. it's a bit illogical not to apply that to his son on the get-go in comparison using a bow and arrow right from the beginning is a bit demeaning for not just the readers but also his father duke hyou it makes most readers not really wishing to continue the story mind you there are bunch of trash on this site so first impressions really count. If it's not up to par, your book will be shelved

it's chinese you better don't waste your time

Dude, just listen to your readers and delete that 1 million payout if you want to play the pitiful, broke family drama. 1 million euros is a load of money, even for a major injury on top of selling their homes that doesn't make sense

that's lame so lame it's cringe

waste of time it would have been great if not the excessive chinese elements just loads of bullshit to prove mystism nonsensical wordings that make you cringe

get a life

which dog wrote this

which f**l wrote this

ah right I almost forgot these people know no other weapon apart from a sword