Item: Primogenitor In Twilight
Rating: 1
Author: PokemonJoker

PokemonJokerLv31yr

2024-01-20 10:01

It’s not readable the spelling and grammar are so bad it hurts

Primogenitor In Twilight

sleepy_aurthor

3.6

23 Chs

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Doonie_DevourerLv14

I'm losing brain cells as I'm reading this please author i recommend some type of spelling corrector or something it needs a lot of work other than that I like the theme of it strike the blood and twilight but I'm not gonna read this unless it's fixed I'll keep it collecting dust until then

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I_HATE_INCENT_Lv5

This is too childish, why don't you just turn the Mc into a female

1yr

B_A_ELv4

I always wanted a fic with combination of strike the blood and twilight , Thank you for making it true and please ,please don't drop it

1yr

MercenaryRollenLv4

he nerfed the mc 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

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immortal_swordLv13

Reveal spoiler

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Marven123Lv14

Its good //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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God_of_hentaiLv14

its alright the grammer and spelling is AASSSS like worse then mtl but its interesting so far ig

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titan10Lv14

don't droppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

1yr

BigBudLv4

Spelling and grammar are atrocious. The chapters are very short and the interactions are strange. Good enough for me.

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omnikinesisLv6

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