Primogenitor In Twilight Book Review By God_of_hentai - WebNovel

God_of_hentaiLv1411mth

2024-01-15 01:03

its alright the grammer and spelling is AASSSS like worse then mtl but its interesting so far ig

Primogenitor In Twilight

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God_of_hentaiLv14

i take it back its terrible its like reading a brick

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RainInNightLv14

I mean no offense by asking this since everyone have their preferences, but was it even truely interesting with a ton of summons, each capable of destroying everything the movies ever shown?

God_of_hentai:i take it back its terrible its like reading a brick

11mth

God_of_hentaiLv14

i stopped reading like the chapter after he was reincarnated because the translation was so bad

RainInNight:I mean no offense by asking this since everyone have their preferences, but was it even truely interesting with a ton of summons, each capable of destroying everything the movies ever shown?

11mth

God_of_hentaiLv14

like i think alice saw mc in a vision and thats when i stopped reading cuz the grammer was so bad

RainInNight:I mean no offense by asking this since everyone have their preferences, but was it even truely interesting with a ton of summons, each capable of destroying everything the movies ever shown?

11mth

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Doonie_DevourerLv14

I'm losing brain cells as I'm reading this please author i recommend some type of spelling corrector or something it needs a lot of work other than that I like the theme of it strike the blood and twilight but I'm not gonna read this unless it's fixed I'll keep it collecting dust until then

11mth

I_HATE_INCENT_01Lv5

This is too childish, why don't you just turn the Mc into a female

10mth

B_A_ELv4

I always wanted a fic with combination of strike the blood and twilight , Thank you for making it true and please ,please don't drop it

11mth

MercenaryRollenLv4

he nerfed the mc 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

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immortal_swordLv12

Reveal spoiler

10mth

Marven123Lv14

Its good //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

11mth

titan10Lv14

don't droppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

11mth

BigBudLv4

Spelling and grammar are atrocious. The chapters are very short and the interactions are strange. Good enough for me.

11mth

omnikinesisLv6

the chapters are too short, you can read the whole fanfic in 5 min top, and the dialogue is like reading a French play. brief, it's not worthwhile ...

11mth

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