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DerangedNDepressed
DerangedNDepressedLv47mth
2024-08-04 02:23

The pacing is too confusing and all over the place,we don't find out what his ability even is until like 20 chapters have passed. The characters don't really feel human, it's like seeing AI interact. Overall,disappointing,though I guess there are worse ones. Author most likely used AI.

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DerangedNDepressed
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it says i read up to 18 ch because it started skipping.

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Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] The story is quite complicated.. In the beginning (Ch1), it is a story about MC before he gets transmigrated into his favourite novel world.. Then, for a few chapters (Ch2-17), it is about "Adrian original self," who is the person or character that MC possessed after transmigrated later.. After all that, then, it finally starts the story about transmigrated MC.. The name of EACH characters is also almost identical with only slightly differences.. So, I won't blame if some people are going to be confused.. Long story short, here is my summary: 馃憠馃徎MC has Hidden Power? Check鉁旓笍 馃憠馃徎The characters of MC possessed is mystery? Check鉁旓笍 馃憠馃徎MC grows in a strong family? Check鉁旓笍 馃憠馃徎MC dunno he adopted? Check鉁旓笍 馃憠馃徎MC adopted parents die by some propaganda of royal family? Check鉁旓笍 馃憠馃徎MC has a younger sister (adopted)? Check鉁旓笍 馃憠馃徎MC got amazing awakening talent but cripple in "some ways"? Check鉁旓笍 馃憠馃徎Everyone sees MC as a trash due to his "cripple" awakened? Check鉁旓笍 馃憠馃徎MC willingly becomes a "bad guy" in front of his sister eyes to protect her, EVEN THOUGH, he can explain to her without any backlash? Check鉁旓笍 馃憠馃徎His sisters disgust with MC even though MC obviously does "that" for her benefits? Check鉁旓笍 馃憠馃徎A lot of unexplained scenes jump? Check鉁旓笍 馃憠馃徎Are there any System, Golden finger, or cheat abilities as transmigrated? Beep鉂岋笍 馃憠馃徎Are there any interesting elements? Beep鉂岋笍 馃憠馃徎Good fight scene? Beep鉂岋笍 馃憠馃徎OP MC? Beep鉂岋笍.. For me, he is not.. But the author might disagree.. The author said MC has OP talent, and his power is like "Prophecy," which is kinda disappointed.. Well, I guess, from an author point of view, the power to see the future randomly (cannot control) is OP?? But don't forget, as a Transmigrator, why did MC need power like future insight where he already knew all events that were going to happen in the novel?? I can't see any interesting development here.. There is an author from another novel who tries to argue that his MC is OP too, and his MC power is "cloning".. So, I'm too lazy to explain, but not everyone has the same opinion.. I lose interest when I learn about MC power.. Plus, there is a Beast Taming tag, I lose all hope.. I'm not a fan of Beast tamer.. But some people might love it.. Also, don't misjudged this novel. It is a good novel.. It just not my cup of tea.. I'm going to read it IF NOT for MC "cripple awakened", boring ability, and MC struggle/miserable storyline.. I might read this novel in the future if I saw a review informing that MC cured his "cripple awakened" or got any OP abilities BUT it is unlikely because if it possible, the principal of the academy MC attended would already told him about it.. Instead, the principal only hoped miracle happened to MC.. So, good luck..

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