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Narko_Ko
Narko_KoLv18mth
2024-07-05 13:04

Well, yes, FK, I thought the hero would move to an additional character, especially since the character of Adrian was written well, but what do you transfer him to the hero? I don't know what you're thinking. Let's be honest, if mc incarnated into an extra character, it would be a very good novel, but yes, the writing and the story are good, and yet I can't continue after changing Adrian.

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Peace_in_Chaos
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I really don't understand what you meant. Alex is an reborn as an extra character, so what do you mean by that? You are jumping to conclusions too soon.

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Captain_Spoiler
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Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] The story is quite complicated.. In the beginning (Ch1), it is a story about MC before he gets transmigrated into his favourite novel world.. Then, for a few chapters (Ch2-17), it is about "Adrian original self," who is the person or character that MC possessed after transmigrated later.. After all that, then, it finally starts the story about transmigrated MC.. The name of EACH characters is also almost identical with only slightly differences.. So, I won't blame if some people are going to be confused.. Long story short, here is my summary: 👉🏻MC has Hidden Power? Check✔️ 👉🏻The characters of MC possessed is mystery? Check✔️ 👉🏻MC grows in a strong family? Check✔️ 👉🏻MC dunno he adopted? Check✔️ 👉🏻MC adopted parents die by some propaganda of royal family? Check✔️ 👉🏻MC has a younger sister (adopted)? Check✔️ 👉🏻MC got amazing awakening talent but cripple in "some ways"? Check✔️ 👉🏻Everyone sees MC as a trash due to his "cripple" awakened? Check✔️ 👉🏻MC willingly becomes a "bad guy" in front of his sister eyes to protect her, EVEN THOUGH, he can explain to her without any backlash? Check✔️ 👉🏻His sisters disgust with MC even though MC obviously does "that" for her benefits? Check✔️ 👉🏻A lot of unexplained scenes jump? Check✔️ 👉🏻Are there any System, Golden finger, or cheat abilities as transmigrated? Beep❌️ 👉🏻Are there any interesting elements? Beep❌️ 👉🏻Good fight scene? Beep❌️ 👉🏻OP MC? Beep❌️.. For me, he is not.. But the author might disagree.. The author said MC has OP talent, and his power is like "Prophecy," which is kinda disappointed.. Well, I guess, from an author point of view, the power to see the future randomly (cannot control) is OP?? But don't forget, as a Transmigrator, why did MC need power like future insight where he already knew all events that were going to happen in the novel?? I can't see any interesting development here.. There is an author from another novel who tries to argue that his MC is OP too, and his MC power is "cloning".. So, I'm too lazy to explain, but not everyone has the same opinion.. I lose interest when I learn about MC power.. Plus, there is a Beast Taming tag, I lose all hope.. I'm not a fan of Beast tamer.. But some people might love it.. Also, don't misjudged this novel. It is a good novel.. It just not my cup of tea.. I'm going to read it IF NOT for MC "cripple awakened", boring ability, and MC struggle/miserable storyline.. I might read this novel in the future if I saw a review informing that MC cured his "cripple awakened" or got any OP abilities BUT it is unlikely because if it possible, the principal of the academy MC attended would already told him about it.. Instead, the principal only hoped miracle happened to MC.. So, good luck..

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