Review Detail of SiegerInducer in I've been reborn as a villain in an erotic game

Sentence structure, paragraph design, and grammar are all poor quality. The author switches between first - and third-person perspective, seemingly, every other sentence. This amplifies the grammatical errors while emphasizing the author inexperience in writing. Characters are non-relatable because there is no progressive development. To sum up the story; dude dies, wakes up in a video game as a noble, screws anything that crosses his path, the end.