you maybe want to release a new chapter rather than a repeat

I'm gonna be "that guy" real quick. Unlimited 7.62mm ammo. Is it 7.62x39, which is commonly used in Kalshnikov rifles, 7.62x51, which is the NATO equilivent of .308, 7.62x54R, which has the notorious Mosin Nagent associated with it or even 7.62x35 which is more commonly referred to as .300 Blackout? I didn't bring up the 9mm subject because 9x19 is the most commonly known, but I cannot sit idly with this one.

Sentence structure, paragraph design, and grammar are all poor quality. The author switches between first - and third-person perspective, seemingly, every other sentence. This amplifies the grammatical errors while emphasizing the author inexperience in writing. Characters are non-relatable because there is no progressive development. To sum up the story; dude dies, wakes up in a video game as a noble, screws anything that crosses his path, the end.

I'm utterly impressed at the complete inability to use the same name for a single character across multiple chapters. Kaiya, Kayla, Kiera. Peter, Pete. Keith, Casey. Presley, Prescott. I'm sure there's others in missing but you need to go back and fix this. How is a reader supposed to fully engage in a story when the characters names won't follow any consistency?

Go8ng back to my previous comment regarding rifle ammunition in a handgun, the caliber you listed is literally for the M16

Please enlightened me as to what handgun model would be chambered in a rifle caliber.

Highly disappointing. Months of waiting for a subpar, expedited ending.

so does the demon mark he received just not exist anymore or will things brought about in previous chapter actually begin to matter

Few things. 1) what ever happened to the assassin from 2) will he ever do something with the noble family he already injected his cells into3) seeing as it was never addressed, what happened to the sister of the unconscious girl

1/4th of a second is a quarter second

Serious question. Has everybody just forgotten about Carol? They never went to check on her after seeing her location on the map and she hasn't popped up either.

Tell you what, I have far too much free time, and I see potential in this. If you are willing, I can start reading this all over again and leave corrective paragraph comments where they are needed. It will be your choice to use them. Just let me know if you'd want essentially a free editor.

"So you're not going to do it? Okay, I will find someone else to do it. Have a good day, Madam Gayler." Grammar and punctuation structured correctly

he experienced it first hand grammar correction

, but if she's like this, punctuation and grammar correction

You are consistently using a comma where a period should be. A comma is a pause in a sentence or break in one consistent sentence, whereas a period ends that sentence. Every author is able to return and edit their published chapters. Therefore, I recommend correcting the punctuation. Grammar can be fixed later.

chapters continue to release yet this one remains unfixed. removing from my list

literally the third chapter in and there's a major uploading error. I'll be back when you actually fix it

Reverse world or not, the basic concept of speech and phrases doesn't change. Couple with the flipping of general words and consisted misspellings, this is becoming harder to read by the paragraph.

digger. the phrase is gold digger