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Life decided to kick me in the sack and serve me a heaping plate of "get fucked". Barely have time to handle household necessities let alone write. I still plan to continue this, but I have no timeline as to when.
you maybe want to release a new chapter rather than a repeat
I'm gonna be "that guy" real quick. Unlimited 7.62mm ammo. Is it 7.62x39, which is commonly used in Kalshnikov rifles, 7.62x51, which is the NATO equilivent of .308, 7.62x54R, which has the notorious Mosin Nagent associated with it or even 7.62x35 which is more commonly referred to as .300 Blackout? I didn't bring up the 9mm subject because 9x19 is the most commonly known, but I cannot sit idly with this one.
Sentence structure, paragraph design, and grammar are all poor quality. The author switches between first - and third-person perspective, seemingly, every other sentence. This amplifies the grammatical errors while emphasizing the author inexperience in writing. Characters are non-relatable because there is no progressive development. To sum up the story; dude dies, wakes up in a video game as a noble, screws anything that crosses his path, the end.
I'm utterly impressed at the complete inability to use the same name for a single character across multiple chapters. Kaiya, Kayla, Kiera. Peter, Pete. Keith, Casey. Presley, Prescott. I'm sure there's others in missing but you need to go back and fix this. How is a reader supposed to fully engage in a story when the characters names won't follow any consistency?
Go8ng back to my previous comment regarding rifle ammunition in a handgun, the caliber you listed is literally for the M16
Please enlightened me as to what handgun model would be chambered in a rifle caliber.
Highly disappointing. Months of waiting for a subpar, expedited ending.
so does the demon mark he received just not exist anymore or will things brought about in previous chapter actually begin to matter
Few things. 1) what ever happened to the assassin from 2) will he ever do something with the noble family he already injected his cells into3) seeing as it was never addressed, what happened to the sister of the unconscious girl