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DevilDarkness
DevilDarknessAuthor11mth
2024-01-16 03:20

This is my novel and it's my review. of course I'll give 5 stars. . if you're thinking of reading it - read it without any hesitation, right now. if you're here to ask me questions before reading it - do it fast and then go read it. if you're just here to scroll siit and spread hate - fk u

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Just_act_lazy
Just_act_lazyLv12

what about the other novel with ali

DevilDarkness
DevilDarknessAuthor

I'll finish that one soon. I've made a goal to post 7chs of both LOAN & LOSS a week. while rich villain will have 4 chs a week.

Just_act_lazy:what about the other novel with ali
DevilDarkness
DevilDarknessAuthor

also post thy review

Just_act_lazy:what about the other novel with ali
That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

How many is in the harem?

DevilDarkness:I'll finish that one soon. I've made a goal to post 7chs of both LOAN & LOSS a week. while rich villain will have 4 chs a week.
That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

What happened to too?

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DevilDarkness
DevilDarknessAuthor

this is right tho. this is my second story. first was loan with Rio/shiva..second is loss with ali...

That_Annoying_guy:What happened to too?
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DevilDarkness
DevilDarknessAuthor

ahh I get it, u got confused for the rich villain book, actually the current book stepping stone one is a rewrite of that second book. the rich villain didn't quite turn out well so i dropped and chose to restart it with a better setting and better planning. my third and fourth book will come a lot later. atleast 5-6 months in the future

That_Annoying_guy:What happened to too?
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That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

OK, thanks for telling me and clearing up my confusion

DevilDarkness:ahh I get it, u got confused for the rich villain book, actually the current book stepping stone one is a rewrite of that second book. the rich villain didn't quite turn out well so i dropped and chose to restart it with a better setting and better planning. my third and fourth book will come a lot later. atleast 5-6 months in the future
Swiftescape
SwiftescapeLv15

Several villain novels but none of them are villains, just anti-hero at best.

ShowmikBD
ShowmikBDLv4

author how many chapters will the novel have alt least?

Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Your novel definitely isn’t 5 stars. At least be honest, pathetic mongrel

Jimmy_Benc
Jimmy_BencLv3

Can you just kill Kevin I’m about to drop the series with how he’s still alive after all the back and forth

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