Review Detail of ACHILLES in Throne of Shadows: The Conqueror (HxH)

Great book ìdea he just went at it the wrong way similer to his kuroko fic of always hiding his power which doesn't work in action like these and irritates the hell out of readers adding Ocs to an anime with a variety of characters and flashbacks But good writing needs to work on action scenes which is due to him holding back alot but as of now since flashback ended it got alot better as he clarified the abillity but he still is holding back and is on an whole bunch of words with not much to show for it as i doubt he can beat netoro as he said but hopes it get better or author moves on from these always holding back fics and all secretive for 200 chapters like the kuroko fic but it seems to be imporving.[718]