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Lane_the_worst
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2024-03-24 09:38

why make the MC a narcissist i hate how in the early chapters he's like "I'm the best at martial arts and i'm the most handsome someone can get"[img=faceslap] but otherwise good novel :)

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ObservantReader
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how could MC be narcissistic when everything he said is the factual truth? He 𝗶𝘀 the greatest martial artist 𝗮𝗻𝗱 the most handsome on the planet, and he doesn't bother hiding it, which made it look like he's a narcissist (and if you were him, you would be narcissistic too). though I agree that this is a good novel.

Lane_the_worst
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ok he is the greatest martial artist and the most handsome on the planet but it kinda gets annoying when they keep shoving it in your face over and over again even though we already know

ObservantReader:how could MC be narcissistic when everything he said is the factual truth? He 𝗶𝘀 the greatest martial artist 𝗮𝗻𝗱 the most handsome on the planet, and he doesn't bother hiding it, which made it look like he's a narcissist (and if you were him, you would be narcissistic too). though I agree that this is a good novel.
Lane_the_worst
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Lane_the_worst:ok he is the greatest martial artist and the most handsome on the planet but it kinda gets annoying when they keep shoving it in your face over and over again even though we already know
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ObservantReader
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true true

Lane_the_worst:ok he is the greatest martial artist and the most handsome on the planet but it kinda gets annoying when they keep shoving it in your face over and over again even though we already know
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ObservantReader:true true
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