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J_Lansu
J_LansuLv11yr
2024-01-04 21:11

Your have great writing style. The vivid descriptions make visualizing the action and environment effortless. Your story is very engaging and flows naturally. The characters are well-crafted and memorable, each with their own unique appeal. I don't have a lot of criticism to give. Just only the game notifications a different font: bold or italics. I have only read 2 chapters but I saved your book in my library.

Chronicles of the Undead NPC

Time2die
5.0
44 Chs

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Time2die
Time2dieAuthor

Thanks for the review. Really happy to hear that you liked it.

1yr
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That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

is this a harem or no harem?

Time2die:Thanks for the review. Really happy to hear that you liked it.
12mth
Time2die
Time2dieAuthor

no harem

That_Annoying_guy:is this a harem or no harem?
12mth
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That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

Thanks for replying

Time2die:no harem
12mth
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That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

I don’t like harem and I don’t mind if it’s romance or not

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12mth
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Time2die
Time2dieAuthor

I don't like harem too. Hope you enjoy reading the story.

That_Annoying_guy:I don’t like harem and I don’t mind if it’s romance or not
12mth
JBFIRE_77
JBFIRE_77Lv4

no romance please it holds back the MC

Time2die:I don't like harem too. Hope you enjoy reading the story.
11mth
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Time2die
Time2dieAuthor

I will see to it. Most probably it won't be there, even if it is there it won't hold him back as it defeats the purpose of him being a zombie and merciless.

JBFIRE_77:no romance please it holds back the MC
11mth
JBFIRE_77
JBFIRE_77Lv4

Time2die:I will see to it. Most probably it won't be there, even if it is there it won't hold him back as it defeats the purpose of him being a zombie and merciless.
11mth
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Marcos_Souza_4834
Marcos_Souza_4834Lv13

although it only has a few chapters, you can already see the great potential, personally I really like stories where the MC becomes a complete monster, and especially the undead part, I'm simply loving this part of the work, I wanted a lot more chapters like this great book

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DeatH_upon_u
DeatH_upon_uLv2

The story is good and explanation is upto a point. The author doesn't waste words simply by describing anything.The pacing is not too fast or too slow.Some minor improvements could be done in the 'Grammer' but it's not a huge problem.The writing style is also very good,all in all this is a good read. I recommend you try a few chapters and you will be hooked.It's different in a good way from the huge amount of books available on the platform.

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mina_jinhoo
mina_jinhooLv2

I have to say this story is captivating and interesting. the titles of the chapters draw me in and your grammar is perfect. Due to time I was only able to read about 3 chapters but immediately added your story to my collections. I'm looking forward to your next update and keep up the good work.

1yr
trophymade
trophymadeLv3

The story is good, I enjoy the plot and the execution behind the idea. Critcism I would offer is to make the game notifications a different font: bold or italics, so it could be easier to see. The writing quality is nice, with good grammar, pacing and description. Everything seems good so far.

1yr
Cosmictear
CosmictearLv15

Excellent first few chapters. There were a few grammar mistakes and some of the sentences could have been fleshed out a little more, but overall it's a good read 👍

1yr
redlady
redladyLv1

It has a nice writing style .I would like more details but i might be subjective . I am not familiar with Games novels but I can tell this novel is plotted well and the author knows what his doing .Keep up the good work ! Love it so far ! // i have to say that the book cover is awesome !

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Ryker_Bale
Ryker_BaleLv13

Your writing style is exceptional. The vivid descriptions make visualizing the action and environment effortless. The pacing is spot-on, allowing the story to unfold naturally and engagingly. The characters are well-crafted and memorable, each with their own unique appeal.

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Unknown_The_Author
Unknown_The_AuthorLv2

Great beginning chapters, love how the story gradually gets bigger and the tasks become harder.

1yr
sleepingpeacefully
sleepingpeacefullyLv3

Good starting chapters with an interesting story. writing and grammar are all good and eagerly waiting for more chapters.

1yr
Sour_corn
Sour_cornLv13

Great writing style, well planned plot and good update schedule. Only read till a few chapters and I must say, this novel is one of a kind

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