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J_Lansu

J_Lansu

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2022-12-22 JoinedNetherlands
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    J_Lansu2 days ago
    Replied to Daniel_Banda_7749

    Thanks for your comment. Chapter 2 is out now!

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    J_Lansu2 days ago
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    This Webnovel has left me breathless, emotionally drained, and craving more. The world-building is incredibly immersive, with a richly detailed landscape that transported me to a realm of wonder and magic. The plot is good, it keeps you on edge. The pacing is well-balanced, with moments of tender introspection and heart-pumping action. If you're looking for a Webnovel that will captivate, inspire, and maybe even break your heart a little, then CRUCIBLE OF SHADOWS is an absolute must-read.

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    J_Lansua year ago
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    Your have great writing style. The vivid descriptions make visualizing the action and environment effortless. Your story is very engaging and flows naturally. The characters are well-crafted and memorable, each with their own unique appeal. I don't have a lot of criticism to give. Just only the game notifications a different font: bold or italics. I have only read 2 chapters but I saved your book in my library.

Dark Bonds: The Demon Within

In a dark and dangerous world where spirits and demons threaten humanity, Jay, a lonely and troubled teenager, becomes entangled in a supernatural battle for his life and soul. The story begins with Jay encountering Ellie, a ghost searching for her lost parents. Despite her spectral nature, Ellie becomes Jay's first true friend, and the two form a bond as they navigate a city teeming with danger. Their journey takes a terrifying turn when a wolf-like creature hunts them down. Desperate to protect Ellie, Jay makes a fateful decision to accept the power of a mysterious and sinister voice in his head. This choice transforms him into a demonic version of himself, granting him incredible strength but at the cost of his humanity. With his new powers, Jay defeats the creature, but the demon within begins to take control, threatening to consume his soul entirely. As Jay struggles with the darkness inside him, the exorcist Chiaki intervenes, determined to stop him. She believes the only way to save the city is to destroy Jay’s heart, which the demon has claimed as its own. However, Ellie refuses to give up on Jay, risking her own safety to protect him. She believes in his ability to fight back and return to his true self. While unconscious, Jay finds himself trapped in a crimson void, facing the demon that seeks to destroy his soul. Fueled by Ellie’s voice calling out to him and his promise to help her find her parents, Jay discovers an inner strength he didn’t know he had. He manages to not only resist the demon but also harness its power without losing control. In the real world, Jay miraculously reverts to his human form, defying the odds and proving that redemption is possible even in the darkest moments. Chiaki, initially skeptical and prepared to kill Jay, is left astonished by his transformation and newfound strength. Together, the trio forms a tentative alliance, realizing that their combined abilities might be the key to overcoming the greater threats looming over the city. The story explores themes of friendship, redemption, and the resilience of the human spirit, showcasing how even in the face of overwhelming darkness, hope and determination can prevail.

J_Lansu · Horror
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