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Jmitch1
Jmitch1Lv156mth
2024-05-25 11:22

The novel is excellent, and has hallmarks of what I enjoy in my stories: political intrigue, war, adventure. Furthermore, the author makes cultivation seem grounded and realistic. The powers people hold and the importance of the common folk and low-ranking warriors. They miss the intricacies of skills and tactics and strategy. That said, I was worried for a moment. I absolutely abhor control skills. And for a bit, I thought the novel would be ruined. Anything that takes away someone’s freedom, is a blight. But, the way the author employs the skills don’t ruin the story. However, I’d say there are some pacing issues. Often, I must say the novel is too slow, and rarely, sometimes too fast. I actually skipped the first 4 chapters outright. Didnt read. The story doesn’t begin until chapter 5. And then there are chapter after chapter of daily things that are at times interesting but at times cumbersome. And I fear at times the author forgets that they need to advance the plot. I can’t go 1/4th of the year with the MC fighting one war. If the plot feels like it’s moving, the story doesn’t feel slow. And there should be purpose to a chapter. When I finish reading a chapter, I should feel as if there was a purpose to it. Sometimes, I’m like, “meh”. In the end, I’m enjoying myself. I hope the novel continues, but I also hope in the future the author tightens up the storytelling.

Legend of The Young Master

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4.7
233 Chs

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From being a thug type of gangster to being born into a historic eastern fantasy type of world, the main character's life completely turned 180° lol, I bet it's gonna be fun to See his journey and how he handles his powers. Sure gonna finish this story as more chapters comes out

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Felt pity for the old man ngl he's poor and above that he had to take care of our MC, I understand his decision for giving up the Young kid tbh I'm very excited to see what's coming ahead for him and the MC... I have full trust on the writer to meet the expectations😁

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