Jmitch1
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Jmitch121 hours agoCommentedSo much in here with odd names, makes it hard to follow
- Jmitch15 days agoCommented
Drowning 10 years? That’s unbelievable strength and cruelty
- Jmitch116 days agoCommented
Sounds like the start of a new novel
- Jmitch120 days agoPosted
Problem is the writing. The story and translation are okay okay, but the writing shows the author is inexperienced. They are weaving in exposition in dialogue in such a way that makes it hard to believe someone just said that.
- Jmitch120 days agoCommented
So detailed. What poor writing. No one talks like that.
- Jmitch120 days agoCommented
Why is there Han vs. non-Han in this?