It's got an interesting premise and a pretty decent attempt for a first story. There are plenty of things to fix, sure, but an overall fun read and that's what matters. ((I suggest author rereads chapters as a form of proofreading. It's a helpful habit. ))

Author, a question, will you abandon the novel or continue it, why haven't you updated it in a long time?

I abandoned quite a lot of novels when I lost my previous accounts, but this is the one novel that I picked up to read again. The plot and storyline is simply captivating, and I can't wait for the next chapters. Like really, Maverick, start uploading soon

Fell in love with the little sisters bravado... What her name again .. . Yeah Evelyn. A brave little sister, one I wouldn't mine having in place of mine own. Well any way great story. Worldbuilding is marvelous. Trust me on this, you would love this, it so generic and original. Everything shows the author placed much thought into this. Simply Amazing. Give it a try for your self and you would know what I'm talking about.

I suppose the story behind that Lucas guy and Mc will be explained further in the story since I find them more interesting than rescuing Evelyn😅....nevertheless it was a rollercoaster ride and intense action in the first chapters

So I will leave my honest review here. First of all, even though I have only read the four chaps, but the beginning were very interesting and you can feel the effort of the author to pull out the beginning.Furthermore the pace was so good but it needs little bit of editing then it will be perfect.

This novel is out of the world, chapter 1 to 5 is full of emotions and suspense which I love so much. I hope you keep it up. I think I will continue reading to find it more about Max. New favorite character of mine😂

if you like rollercoaster experience this is definitely for y'all

I haven't seen a thriller that makes my heart race so fast while reading it.😅😅