Everything is not peach perfect, and not everyone can be satisfied and I simply don't have enough time to think about every single detail, plot holes or plot that may not satisfy some readers, but overall thank you, it truly made me realize that not everyone can be satisfied.
Jaywxrld:I think it good but I stop as soon as I saw he was still in love with Emma and the system tell him to conquer her I don't like girl who listen to there parent about who to love and not see that mean she have no confident just because he lost his parent instead Emma should be comforting him but no
Angeldrex:Everything is not peach perfect, and not everyone can be satisfied and I simply don't have enough time to think about every single detail, plot holes or plot that may not satisfy some readers, but overall thank you, it truly made me realize that not everyone can be satisfied.
Jaywxrld:I think it good but I stop as soon as I saw he was still in love with Emma and the system tell him to conquer her I don't like girl who listen to there parent about who to love and not see that mean she have no confident just because he lost his parent instead Emma should be comforting him but no