the fic is great I finished it in a day it was that much interesting, the oc characters are involved and aren't over bearing but I would have like the mc name to be more cool like toji or satoru or shiki or sora and I would hope mc gets ability to learn jutsu faster as it would be more interesting and I would also love to see original jutsu rather than Rasengan to used as its often used in every Naruto fiction. love to see u finish the fic
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