Review Detail of Primordial in Naruto: Subject #37

I have read every fanfic in Ao3(filtering is horrible there), FanFiction.Net and WebNovel on Naruto. Some I loved, others I dropped on chapter 1. I rarely rate 5 stars since most novels are shit. So I fully reserve the right to judge this novel :P This is potentially 4.7 stars and can be full 5 stars if the chapter frequency or chapter size improves. The story progresses naturally and without leaps of logic or character assassinations. No cliches like Evil Hiruzen or like. Story is good and dialogues flow very naturally. It might become my top 3 Naruto fanfic if continued. There are some typos but nothing major. The only issue might be the short chapters and update frequency. The only potential issue might be how you develop the obvious cheats because it will become very wish fulfillment if not handled properly. I won’t go into detail as it’s very early. My recommendation would be to either shift to less frequency but longer chapters or high frequency but same length chapters. I will recommend the former as it gives time for you to think better and removes the pressure of releasing brain dead chapters to fulfill your obligations of chapter. In both cases, a fixed schedule is key. It’s better to stockpile some chapters to release even if you didn’t write the next one, you could maintain the schedule