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Vegeta_Kakarot
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2024-06-03 00:31

The customary 5 star review by the author is here! ask any questions about this fic here and I will answer it. Also here's a picture of a goat.

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OxyInTheDark
OxyInTheDarkLv1

Any yuri?

Vegeta_Kakarot
Vegeta_KakarotAuthor

No.

OxyInTheDark:Any yuri?
streiz
streizLv14

Who would be the love interest/s?

Vegeta_Kakarot
Vegeta_KakarotAuthor

Shown in the auxiliary chapter. For reference All the cannon girls. Nastuki Minamiya, Aya Tokoyogi. And more

streiz:Who would be the love interest/s?
Game_B_Roll
Game_B_RollLv4

Why the duck MC doesn't attempt to learn magic or something? This is for all Progenitors like they are Immortal so in anime why the heck they wont learn magic like it will give them a lot more versatility!!! like teleportation, traps, protection spells to protect others, spying spells, healing spells, control spells for capture etc.

Vegeta_Kakarot
Vegeta_KakarotAuthor

It's hard for Primogenitors to learn any kind of magic, due to their large amounto magical power. Out of the four only the first Primogenitor, Ki Juranbarda had learned one or two spells, Kojou will learn some spells later on, only a few.

Game_B_Roll:Why the duck MC doesn't attempt to learn magic or something? This is for all Progenitors like they are Immortal so in anime why the heck they wont learn magic like it will give them a lot more versatility!!! like teleportation, traps, protection spells to protect others, spying spells, healing spells, control spells for capture etc.
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Game_B_Roll
Game_B_RollLv4

This is the ideal of fanfics!!! When you watch an anime there is always one negative or nerf by the author!! By which i mean most a the time a cliche that is trialed and tested for example in STB was about making the MC a dense idiot with lots of luck!! If you ask me Kojou doesn't even deserve to be the progenitor because he lacks almost every quality of a king or powerhouse except that he wasn't a coward. But this ruined the whole anime for me!! Especially when he almost gets himself and everyone killed for the like 5th? time!!! Because of him never trying to get power unless it falls into his hands!!! I just had to quit then!! But in this he removes this flaw!! He still has all the likable qualities but is much more reliable and proactive!!! It does have some AU elements which i had always thought the original should have had logically but they had to nerf him!!! Lastly, dont come under the same misunderstanding as me when you read the auxiliary chapter. Even though a lot of women names are given they ain't part of his harem at least till where i am. Also the romance is great!! Not so slow it takes hundreds of chapters nor so fast as if it is a hentai!! It is the perfect pace!! Another thing to mention is the fights!! They are better than the anime which was like throwing mana at the other with hope to win and unless there is a big difference it just goes back and forth repeatedly until MC gets a powerup!! The only thing is that i wish there were a faster update rate!! But i know that is impossible considering the chapter length!! So with all this in mind you should be some of the firstbones to read it because belive it will reach the top of the ranks in a matter of just some time at this rate!! The reason is not already is probably the lack of authors interaction and begging for powerstones etc. Also the grammer is on point so he probably has a editor considering the quality!!

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