Reading all the chapters released so far, I can say that this story has potential. The only problem is that the author, in my opinion, added some things that left the story unconscious. I understand why the protagonist is a layman at the beginning of the story, having been thrown into another world out of nowhere without his consent, but man, you could have done it better. In I was wondering, his wish was for a hot woman and he had eyes for only one man, who was supposed to be the protagonist, but from what you've shown us of the background so far, it doesn't look like she has eyes for him. Of course, what I said now could be wrong and she could only start to be interested in her now that she really is the protagonist. But even if she didn't like him before and it really was just a contract marriage, I don't think she would let the disrespect towards Damian reach that level, after all, even though they are Aoenas by contract, he is still her husband and he is being Wouldn't being disrespected like that be disrespectful towards her? Regarding his powers, well, he hasn't progressed much yet for me to give my opinion, although I don't find the vampire inside him or the servant of Jesus interesting. Anyway, even with my outburst, I consider that this story and the author have potential, even with some elements of Chinese history in this fic. And I hope the author continues to write this story, because I was very interested in this premise. Sorry for any grammar errors, I wrote using Google Translate.
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Thanks for a good review, I knew this problems It's just That my writing can't keep up with my Imagination.
then that just means you need more time to write before posting, write a chapter, let it sit for an hour, or then revise it, I think that should help
