Review Detail of tatsumi_o in Dual Overload of Martial Peak
Review detail
You left too many plot holes, the system wasn’t needed, his first wish was useless because you said he didn’t care about anyone beside himself, hard to read, most of those that write 5 starts reviews on this are brain dead. You said your new so that means you need some true reviews not just UPDATE MORE! or LOLI SYSTEM!
Dual Overload of Martial Peak
Blackiller
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now i read your review carefully just what the Fu*k loli system and who said it is. bro read story first, system is for only give story comedy tag just like some time system and Yang kai has conversation their no way she is loli and i hate that kind of things especially if for small girl and I have little sister and Fu*k you prevent if someone introduced a system that can talk she become loli
I don’t really care about the first wish but with the system girl voice it’s just too cringe for me at least. And beside it better for you to reread the chapter before posting it, even though your English isn’t the best it can get better when you trying to correct yourself
Blackiller:his first wish because he care about his family and system is because only fun truly don't need it but I try to make their conversation fun
tatsumi_o:I don’t really care about the first wish but with the system girl voice it’s just too cringe for me at least. And beside it better for you to reread the chapter before posting it, even though your English isn’t the best it can get better when you trying to correct yourself
tatsumi_o:I don’t really care about the first wish but with the system girl voice it’s just too cringe for me at least. And beside it better for you to reread the chapter before posting it, even though your English isn’t the best it can get better when you trying to correct yourself
Of course they will ask that, most of the manhwa, manhua, novel and fanfics with system genre have a loli “system” and because most of the readers are degenerate people, pervers, losers and so on.
Subsy:Ain’t no way people actually ask for a Loli system
tatsumi_o:Of course they will ask that, most of the manhwa, manhua, novel and fanfics with system genre have a loli “system” and because most of the readers are degenerate people, pervers, losers and so on.
