this is very bad. It's a complete mess. nothing makes sense. In one chapter he does one thing and in the next chapter he immediately contradicts himself. It seems that with each chapter the author wants to follow a different path for the story. Probably the worst story I've ever read. the premise is interesting, but it's not readable, you should really rewrite this. Choose where you want to take this story and follow that path.
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The premise is alright? He has changing motivation as the scene changes with characters. Not really a good reason to rate ons star either way, they made a scaffold to create a balanced system. Because no one really rates stories unless it’s bad or really really good.
Did we read the same story how is this so terrible?
What the frickkkkkkkkkk dude did we read the same story and appreciate the work of the author this is really good and fun read If you want something deep and a mc who is a M read some thing else
idk what horseshi t the above 3 are reading but i completely agree with the review, the premise of the story is a 4 or 5 star definitely but the story just keeps changing so dam much no one except the author (and the 3 idiots above) knows what's going on.. and even recently he randomly just introduced a new power system on top of an already existing one. It's a giant mess, but it's still readable, it's like that one review said it's so bad it seems good
I really don't like how the mc does things, woth no thought given to his actions. It feels to me like the author thought along the lines of "what would this character I like from another story do in this situation" for multiple actions the mc has done and it felt to me like the author is thinking of multiple characters for different actions and making the mc's character look like the Frankenstein's monster from my perspective
