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Desire96
Desire96Lv41yr
2024-04-19 02:32

jeez, awesome, I like the main character's personality, the character interactions, world building, update schedule... and writing quality is also above the standards of what I expect from a novel, and surpassing those standards I set for translated novels by a huge margin... This has some loopholes but nothing major... I would have like to mention them, but I forgot... either way this fic is awesome and has huge potential

Naruto: Uchiha’s Unserious Saga

TitoVillar
4.7
288 Chs

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mortalMika
mortalMikaLv13

i urge you author San, if you could use japanese honorifics it will become solid fanfiction even better than others, i noticed lack of mmm how to say it ... i personally prefer if you could use Sama, San, Sensei, senpai, kohai, Kun, chan...ect in their speech it will be cool i will give you 4 ⭐ star for now btw I'm in the early chapter i will keep reading, i will also like to thank you and i hope we can get more work from you author San. 🔥✌️✌️

1yr

Vengeful_Slave
Vengeful_SlaveLv3

Absolutely amazing. I haven't laughed this much in a long time. I was wheezing and rolling in bed so much that I even surprised myself. Everything is nice especially the interactions and manipulations. Totally unique and deserve a try.

11mth
Daoist5SUG9A
Daoist5SUG9ALv14

I would like to know the original name of the novel. Also so far the translation is pleasant to read.

1yr
Akasha_D_Arcadia
Akasha_D_ArcadiaLv13

So now I will be giving a proper review on the story writing quality : There are a few mistakes in the between lines that happen during translation, like changing he/she and a few more. But the grammar is manageable and above average a d completely readable. story development: I have seen in many Naruto fanfics, the authors just outright forget saving shisui and bringing itachi to the right path. this novel does not do that, The story is developed from time after end of Third great shinobi war. The story develops in an optimal and although not the most logical but in a direction that satisfies the details. character development: The protagonist is funny and fairly strong from the start. The antagonists may be a bit dumb. But overall, every character introduced was good and was given good appearance time. Updating stability: Just one word awesome world background: Well, It's NARUTO

5mth
Abdiezmann
AbdiezmannLv12

This is probably the most funniest Naruto ff about the Uchiha that I've ever read. Keep up the good work, author-san

1yr
AkGreyback
AkGreybackLv2

Every Chapter was Top notch 💯not even for second the smooth flow in story did not dropped, the story is very captivating and as a reader 'I WANT MORE CHAPTERS'.............................

1yr
Daoist2MagJ2
Daoist2MagJ2Lv14

it's really good author I have enjoyed it so far

1yr
Seraphzin
SeraphzinLv11

MC is really fun, I loved it

1yr
Colcci
ColcciLv4

really good story! Hope you have more chapters for us in the future

1yr
Otom
OtomLv12

So the story is very good but I have a warning for you all, Mc has the ms and one the eyes power let him influence people slowly, it’s like a low level hypnose so there is some mind control and rape?? Or sexual abuse ?? So most people here are dumber that’s basically his ms power. In a way the title of this ff is true he makes people dance like puppets and rarely do they suspect anything

4mth
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