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Alanray64
Alanray64Lv151yr
2024-02-19 16:08

Quite n enjoyable read this one. MC has transmigrated over and fuses with the host, he is the dominant person of this fusion (nothing is heard about the original host), inheriting all his memories and emotions which is rather novel as often we hear of these transmigrated MCs who pick up memories and nothing else, so this is a plus. The story develops in a way that through his family growth he gains the combined growth and initially believes through more family he can grow faster, however the system at a later stage reminds him having many members of the family will not generally be best and instead develop his current family to a greater extent, which again is also rather novel in not having upteen wives and concubines etc etc. Overall it is a good growth story, filled with many interesting developments and some intrigue. I find the MC pretty intelligent as he realises the old adage that there is always someone better than him so he develops in a planned and structured manner. I scored it all 5s bar a 4 for world development as I haven’t seen enough of the story world for a solid 5. Regardless, well worth adding to the library.

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Shido1337
Shido1337Lv4

harem novel

Alanray64
Alanray64Lv15

Mildly… has a main wife and I think 2 then a further 2 after he rescues his wife. But no I wouldn’t call it a harem.. it’s a family growth novel, the concubines are more just added for family increase. Not much is discussed about their ins and outs, it is just mentioned the main wife gathers them and the offspring growing.

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ExamPL3
ExamPL3Lv15

Translation quality- The translation quality is quite good but there are some problems with the name for realms switching for a few chapters and the fact that some characters are not properly gendered as the translation switches from she to he. Even so, it is understandable and doesn’t majorly disrupt the reading experience. Updating Stability-The author posts at least a chapter a day and is consistent. Story Development-The novel has a lot of time skips and focuses more on the development of the clan rather than the adventures of the main character. I think it’s quite good as it shows what’s going on and leads properly into time skips. It also makes it more realistic. I do wish that there was more time spent on characters but that is likely a result of the rapid movement of the clan. Overall, very good if you can handle frequent time skips and a focus on wholistic story development. Character Design- The characters are quite good in having some uniqueness and differences but we really don’t get enough time with them to be able to tell how deep they truly are. World Background- The world is designed and portrayed well with a focus on sects and regions of power. The view of the world changes as the clan grows stronger and moves to more challenging areas. Same with this, I would like more time spent on diving into the depths of each area. Even so, each area is unique and has the main character unlocking new and unique things. Overall, don’t expect a masterpiece in character design and worldbuilding, but also realize that the world is very good for what we see of it and that there is still time for the novel to slow down and focus on characters or places. Just be prepared for rapid change. I hope you enjoyed my review. 😁

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