maniac_008

This is a really good naruto fanfic and I am sating this after reading many many fanfics. There is a grammar issue upto the 18-19th chapter which needs to be re-edited. But starting with the 20th chapter, there are no issues and can be read easily. I really good fanfic, don't give up on it easily. Please finish this story!

Let me correct myself, the grammar issues are there only till the 20 chapters. Starting from the 20th chapter everything is fine.

If I am to be honest, the grammar issue is only for the first 20-30 chapters. Thats the main issue since its in the start and very easy for people to give up reading. As the story progressed the grammar was normal and there were no issues. This story is a really good fanfic and I would suggest continuing it with changes and editing for the starting chapters. This is a genuine suggestion as I have read countless fanfics and this one is really good.

Why is it not updating anymore? Are you dropping it?

Please start updating again soon, spent so many coins on this novel, would be enraged if this novel is not completed.

A fantastic fanfic, a one of a kind on this platform or anywhwere else. A great job done on the translation as well. A must read for any sports fan. P.S. For people with no patience like me who cannot wait for more chapters, patreon is a good place.

Sorry just checked, in the collection page the chapters are missing but on the home page they are available. My bad.

See, I am thinking of subscribing on your patreon but the only reason stopping me is that among the recent chapters on patreon, you have skipped chapter 92 and chapter 94. Please fix all that.

Please fix this chapter, its repeating the same first half in the second half of the chapter. The update speed is already very slow, on top of that there are such basic mistakes.

A very good one piece fanfic and a good job done on the translation. I hope the update speed could be increased.