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gale200588
gale200588Lv131yr
2024-01-07 16:21

a good read, great command of English and conversations aren't rigid but rather flow into one another. the chapter length might need some improvement but hey I know how hard it is to write, keep up the good work

Taking It All From The Protagonist

Averagewrites
4.5
124 Chs

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Averagewrites
AveragewritesAuthor

fixed the chapter lengths...now ranging 1500-2000 words.

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Averagewrites
AveragewritesAuthor

bless you.

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Averagewrites
AveragewritesAuthor

how are you seeing the novel?

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Tiago_Maia_1922
Tiago_Maia_1922Lv4

is it a harem?

Averagewrites:how are you seeing the novel?
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Averagewrites
AveragewritesAuthor

no?

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Averagewrites
AveragewritesAuthor

no?

Tiago_Maia_1922:is it a harem?
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Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

Are you certain it has no harem for the protagonist we will be following

Averagewrites:no?
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Averagewrites
AveragewritesAuthor

I promise...its a max of two love interests between any of the main characters....as long as you, the reader(s) come through on me. Motivate me by reading through the book, it's a slow chapter release but the plot is neat. Anyway, enjoy reading

Hardy1j:Are you certain it has no harem for the protagonist we will be following
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Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

So Gates Amon will have two wives/girlfriends?? Is that what you mean?

Averagewrites:I promise...its a max of two love interests between any of the main characters....as long as you, the reader(s) come through on me. Motivate me by reading through the book, it's a slow chapter release but the plot is neat. Anyway, enjoy reading
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Averagewrites
AveragewritesAuthor

nah, that's not what I meant. I meant that each character, their love interests (if any) in their entire lifespan would only be two people and that's if there's a love triangle or one dies.

Hardy1j:So Gates Amon will have two wives/girlfriends?? Is that what you mean?
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Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

I am not talking about potential love interests but like one they are intimate with and actually love...

Averagewrites:nah, that's not what I meant. I meant that each character, their love interests (if any) in their entire lifespan would only be two people and that's if there's a love triangle or one dies.
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Averagewrites
AveragewritesAuthor

you'll have to read to find out

Hardy1j:I am not talking about potential love interests but like one they are intimate with and actually love...
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Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

Well, I only read single female lead stories so I guess I won't find out...

Averagewrites:you'll have to read to find out
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Averagewrites
AveragewritesAuthor

Guess you'll miss out then...sorry.

Hardy1j:Well, I only read single female lead stories so I guess I won't find out...
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Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

Nevermind I miss out on many stories due to my rigidness Though, I might try yours as you limited the FL to 2 when they d¡ed or brokeup, so its better than harems🤷🏻‍♂️

Averagewrites:Guess you'll miss out then...sorry.
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Averagewrites
AveragewritesAuthor

sure, great.

Hardy1j:Nevermind I miss out on many stories due to my rigidness Though, I might try yours as you limited the FL to 2 when they d¡ed or brokeup, so its better than harems🤷🏻‍♂️
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_n1ht
_n1htLv13

i haven't read it yet, but based on the synopsis it's pretty similar to Obtaining 10x reward.

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Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

I don't know how to describe what I feel, it just felt a waste of time to read this. The story is that bad. Originally, I wouldn't have read this after the author said the romance will be where fl might die before getting replaced since I hate that. But there was next to no romance till now, making me read. Here starts my real review: Writing Quality: It isn't amazing or bad. Just average with many typos. Readable, nonetheless(better than 50% on this app...) Story: Guess how much time passed? 2 days. Yep, you read that right. That's how you know this has next to no story, let alone development. At least, that's how it appeared to me. Characters: The side characters are well-written and their description make them feel somewhat real. The problem is the MC, the one we are supposed to read. He has positives, like he is an adult. Unfortunately, his smartness, cunning, and planning nature is forgotten as the book continues. All that's left is an adult in a child's body with impulsive anger disorder. You can prolly guess what happens, right? He wants everyone under him and in control, he doesn't trust anyone. Just making them sign sla. ve contracts... Now, that is understandable, given the world, but if you read, you will understand what I mean. World background: Non-existent. Conclusion: Not my cup of tea. If you like an edgy, immature, Protagonist, then go for it. Despite the story having a good premise, it just failed to meet any expectations one can have... I hope you don't delete my review and improve yourself as an author...

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Innovation_Inu
Innovation_InuLv13

I guess I can finally read one where I don't have to feel like I will punch my screen. Haha... I should have a good time hating on the dumb hero and loving this villain~~

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DaoistjgSy04
DaoistjgSy04Lv15

Hope to see you continue the story. I’d like to see how it ends

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Khutsocool_0
Khutsocool_0Lv13

love thia novel and tbe characters, keep it up👍

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Silent_Boy_4303
Silent_Boy_4303Lv3

I read only 3 chp , i liked i will donate 2 powerstone

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wizkiard
wizkiardLv1

5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star The story is flowing The story is flowing The story is flowing The story is flowing

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SiiiFuuu
SiiiFuuuLv3

An actually good story on this app. Currently at chapter 14 and I can't stop reading it.

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Brian_Hanes_117
Brian_Hanes_117Lv1

The grammar and whatnot is excellent. The updates are consistent. The story develops nicely. The characters seem interesting, but I'd like more vivid breakdowns of different ones at the start (instead of that dynamic with the MC). The style is distinct and really stands out from most. Being a visual person, I'd like to know more about what the characters look like and the view of the environment around them. The worldbuilding is great. This is an interesting read for people who appreciate magical adventures. To the writer, I welcome you to check out my original fanfic "Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger" it is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey". It can be found here on Webnovel with a quick search. You may want to read the first chapter or two of AMJ to get a feeling of what the first story was like but that isn't necessary.

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Mi_Mika
Mi_MikaLv13

One of the Authors who like to stretch the unnecessary and make the smallest possible chapters.On chapter 46 or 49 and I can't believe I wasted so many fast passes.There are many annoying grammatical, punctuation and missing words and I don't know if this is just translated but it somehow it works.

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