Review Detail of Garry_Pal in The Author’s Paradox
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annoying your writing style is annoying get back to realty buddy we are not on poetic Competition that you write every thing in poetic manner its annoying to read i am droping this good luck hope you improve in your next novel
The Author’s Paradox
Superfabinho
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SuperfabinhoAuthorSuperfabinho
Veris_:I’m gonna try your novel for the sole reason that you keep using dean winchester gifs and i love u for it.
SuperfabinhoAuthorSuperfabinho
Garry_PalLv12Garry_Pal
na buddy it is just when i reading your novel it annoys me that you describe a simple task in a most poetic manner which is Unnecessary. that make me drop your novel in 7 ch
Superfabinho:Ouch, that hurt. Did I offend you by accident, buddy? Forgive me, please? I know that my writing is not that great, but I’m trying to improve. I changed a lot of things in the last chapters, made it easier to understand and more lively. Thanks for the constructive criticism!!!image
SuperfabinhoAuthorSuperfabinho
Garry_Pal:na buddy it is just when i reading your novel it annoys me that you describe a simple task in a most poetic manner which is Unnecessary. that make me drop your novel in 7 ch
Myrtle_SLv1Myrtle_S
Don't mind it, people have their own writing style, it's okay so long as the reader understands what you're conveying easily
Superfabinho:Ouch, that hurt. Did I offend you by accident, buddy? Forgive me, please? I know that my writing is not that great, but I’m trying to improve. I changed a lot of things in the last chapters, made it easier to understand and more lively. Thanks for the constructive criticism!!!image
Veris_Lv13Veris_
I’m gonna try your novel for the sole reason that you keep using dean winchester gifs and i love u for it.
Superfabinho:well, this is my writingimage