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Veris_2mthCommentedit’s pretty interesting so far :3 i’m excited to see where it goes
What do you think of the story so far? Leave me some feedback so I can know what I need to add and improve.- Veris_2mthCommented
lol legalized theft- that’s how i feel buying anything these days 😭😭
Decision made, I access the app and call a car. When the fare flashed on the screen, my eyes rolled involuntarily. 20 dollars! That's not a fare, that's robbery! I could have protested, forsworn the ride, and opted for an epic walk - but practicality wins over pride, at least this time, and I resign myself to legalized theft. - Veris_2mthReplied to Veris_
ahh i’ve only seen it used as consulate nvm it just felt weird
I woke up to those annoying rays of sunlight hitting my face as if they were physical reminders from the early hours: "Wake up, you need to get up early!" A sigh escaped my lips as I rose and stretched, feeling the satisfaction of being in a body that had become strangely strengthened – one of the few consolates of this new and challenging place. - Veris_2mthCommented
consolations maybe? consolates isn’t a word😭
I woke up to those annoying rays of sunlight hitting my face as if they were physical reminders from the early hours: "Wake up, you need to get up early!" A sigh escaped my lips as I rose and stretched, feeling the satisfaction of being in a body that had become strangely strengthened – one of the few consolates of this new and challenging place. - Veris_2mthCommented
I really liked the descriptions here maybe i’m just getting used to the writing style but this monologue was well done 😌
With the characteristic enthusiasm of someone who commands their destiny, Sam leaves the training field with a vibrant laugh, a pure manifestation of an unshakable soul. Make no mistake – there is no shadow of arrogance in his demeanor; what overflows from him is undying faith and an optimism that shines brighter than the morning sun. Sam, a product of an ordinary family, was nurtured with love and hope. His parents, pillars of positivity and support, and his little sister, always bringing him joy and admiration, have prepared him to face the world with an open heart and a smile on his face. He carries with him the vibrant contrast of his upbringing, especially when placed side by side with Dean – each a silkscreen of a different world within the same universe. - Veris_2mthReplied to Ashborn1609
Nah I agree with you. There’s a difference between quality writing that includes immersive language and writing that drags on lost in unnecessary comparisons/details. I’m pushing through because the story seems interesting and it’s not like the writing is technically of poor quality, but I wish some descriptions were on the simpler side. Plus with all the convoluted language constantly being used there’s less immersion with the character’s emotions.
Will Dean emerge on the other side intact, transformed, or perhaps broken? The master of narratives has now become a character, subject to the whims of his own imagination. And like any good character, he awaits the arc of his story to unfold, while the stage of his destiny, the floor of his living room, takes on the solemnity of a battlefield in the twilight of a revolutionary choice. - Veris_2mthReplied to Nyla_Jones
no ur right this feels almost like a script lol 😭
"Hello Students, nice to meet you, I am Raji Croft, the Principal of this academy and an SS Rank awakened." (Raji) - Veris_3mthReplied to Ashborn1609
yeah right? they were blue
"I shall keep that in mind." Morwen waved a dismissive hand. "Once those self-proclaimed heroes take their leave, then the target I've been pursuing will finally be within my reach." He conjured a holographic image of a young woman with silver-blonde hair and striking red eyes – Valencia Freya. - Veris_3mthReplied to Generic_007
if they’re not black it won’t be black tfym 😭 i would know 🙇♀️🧠
"It has the potential of becoming a BBC." . - Veris_5mthCommented
isn’t he the 5th son?
"Well, well. Who is this, aren't you Young Master Nox? I didn't expect the third son of the Rinehafer family to end up at Eldain Academy. How nice to meet you." - Veris_5mthCommented
how tf it gonna change color 😭😭😭
"It has the potential of becoming a BBC." . - Veris_6mthCommented
bro js… get black… be the mc u were made to be
Evan didn't care much about the design and chose a navy blue hoverboard, soon a staff member brought the hoover border Evan selected. - Veris_6mthReplied to monstrou_1st
PLS
'Did my rejection hit him too hard' the man thought while leading the way, 'I should apologize to him properly later I don't want him to commit suicide because I rejected him'. - Veris_9mthReplied to Rydiah
that’s gonna be so cute 🫶
"Well, I just know this morning. I usually got morning sickness and these past few days I keep feeling dizzy. So, I went to the imperial pharmacy and have a check-up. The physician said I'm eight weeks pregnant." - Veris_9mthCommented
Hey author!! wishing you the best- as someone who also deals with depression i understand 💚 i just want to let you know that you’re helping someone else. i deal with my mental issues by reading and immersing myself in stories and your story has helped me within these past few days as i’ve had a lot to deal with and needed a distraction to sort myself out. so, if you need time to sort yourself out i understand.
Ch 211 Reencounter - Veris_9mthCommented
at least conditioner
Yue looked up at him... "shampoo?"