it's rare for a good jjk fic and from you author I can only imagine it being good

mc is beta when its came to nobara. simp

So, I'd sadly not recommend reading this: the story's pacing is absurd (seriously, this was just bad storytelling), the characters are about as bland as they come, scene and character description are almost completely absent, and the author is thinking about accelerating the pacing even more (I'm on chapter 13). I'm kinda annoyed that I got my expectations up when reading the first chapter; it had pretty good spelling, an enjoyable writing style, and was just... interesting. 

A whole lot of yuji glazing but i am all for it

The story is very good! I recommend it to anyone who wants to read it! I think the only point that didn't make the story 5 stars for me but 4.6 is because the story has no stability in writing and the author hasn't updated for more than 20 days.....

Incredibly bland. That is how I would summarise this story. Mind numbing start with a lifeless mc who, I admit, does get a bit more tolerable over the course of the story, yet simply feels like a more mature, not stupid yuji. There is no individuality to him at all. The power progression is good, if put in a vacuum. Give it context and the battles are TERRIBLE. Excessively drawn out so as to keep cannon the same. He doesn't learn from his mistakes, yaps constantly, no sense of urgency when he should know better, doesn't capitalise on opportunities, and then complains when shit doesn't go his way. No planning before the shibuya incident at all that could circumvent 90% of the problems he encountered. Would background is not expanded on at all, and the world feels incredibly small. The writing quality is average, nothing much to say there. I found myself skipping the next three chapters the moment kinjaku appeared (during yuji and mahito fight), it was so forced that I couldn't bear to read it. So overall, a bit below average in terms of plot (however little there is lol) with acceptable writing quality and a lacklustre mc who doesn't seem to impact the story at all even with his tremendous boost in power compared to Canon yuji. Very disappointing, but expected.

Didn't had any hope but man, the fights are done great yes sometimes pacing is just fine but NOT BAD, yuji has very well developed character in here, realistic THERE IS ONLY 1 PROBLEM, give other chracter more depth i mean you already have with their fights but try to slow down a little giving the reader more about their personal views and day to day problems it will help them connect better, (STILL TOP LEVEL JJK FAN-FIC)

Keep updating and this'll be a gem.

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