All was well until around chapter 102. One of the things that really made me like the novel was Sol and Akiris. The way they only loved each other and f everything and everyone else. Even tho the author stated multiple times this would be single fl, I can tell by the recent chapters I’ve read it’s going to be a sisterhood. I got over that massive disappointment only for the author to showcase the queen and her daughter messing with each other while spying on Sol and Ikaris’s intimate time together. That dark tag is def there for a reason aside from all the deaths—which I still haven’t forgiven the author for 😭. The writing is good, grammar could be improved (sometimes I think the author is starting their own language 😂), just started reading so I can’t say anything about writing stability. If the things I pointed out earlier doesn’t faze you, I would def recommend giving this book a try. While I won’t be reading any further, I do wish the author great success on their writing journey 😁✌🏾
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Aww, sad to see you go, that one chapter does seem like a deterrent to a lot of readers but Webn makes replacing chapters increasingly hard, for what it's worth though I had a blast reading your comments, and the story only gets better from that extreme blunder. Happy reading [img=recommend] and thank you for the review🫰
I did edit that stuff out of it so nobody after you gets scarred, the story is better without that degeneracy. Glad you said something instead of just leaving.
Rowan_Eternal:Aww, sad to see you go, that one chapter does seem like a deterrent to a lot of readers but Webn makes replacing chapters increasingly hard, for what it's worth though I had a blast reading your comments, and the story only gets better from that extreme blunder. Happy reading [img=recommend] and thank you for the review🫰image
