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THE_ARCHITECT
THE_ARCHITECTLv48mth
2024-08-14 23:23

I am not going to complain or do anything else major Overall the story is kind of good but I just wish that the author showed more instead of telling The lore and world-building could use some reconstruction, and the back story of the MC could be inserted here and there. Overall it's a good story that needs more investment, The skills being used don't need to be explained but I would like to see their fundamentals, I am a big fan of world-building and lore and the story does not focus on that too much that's why my rating is low

The World's most Overpowered Side-Character

Rowan_Eternal
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434 Chs

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Rowan_Eternal
Rowan_EternalAuthor

I appreciate the honest review, I'll take that into consideration and try reconstructing a more feasible tale, I'm also a big fan of world building. Thanks for reading.

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THE_ARCHITECT
THE_ARCHITECTLv4

like the new cover

Rowan_Eternal:I appreciate the honest review, I'll take that into consideration and try reconstructing a more feasible tale, I'm also a big fan of world building. Thanks for reading.
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Rowan_Eternal
Rowan_EternalAuthor

Thanks, my art isn't ready yet so I'll settle while I grow.[img=recommend]

THE_ARCHITECT:like the new cover
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Everyone did it so why can't I? Future questions can come here ಠ⁠_⁠ಠ

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Updated review after catching up to the most recent chapter 292! (spoiler free) Everything's improved so much since the start, I fall more in love with every single one of them the more I read their story, so much has happened yet youve managed to consistently make the story engaging, 10\10 recommended, still, wonderful stuff man🤭. I'd love to see more of your art too, drawing your own characters and so beautifully, massive W😍

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