Review Detail of Haitch in DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex

Author, the characters of this ff don't feel like they're very real at all, they feel like machines and one dimensional, and it can feel very strange to read the fic for that reason, other thing is that your fic feels like I'm reading a logbook telling events that happened instead of a actual history, there's too many small timeskips that end up disrupting the flow of reading, dialogue is also very important in a novel to make the flow of events feel more organic, that's my bit of criticism I have for you. I'm dropping the fic at chapter 3, but I like the idea of the fic, so I'll leave it in my library and maybe come back to read more in the future and see if it get's better in the later chapters. Also english is not my first language, so I hope this is understandable