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Haitch1mthPostedAuthor, the characters of this ff don't feel like they're very real at all, they feel like machines and one dimensional, and it can feel very strange to read the fic for that reason, other thing is that your fic feels like I'm reading a logbook telling events that happened instead of a actual history, there's too many small timeskips that end up disrupting the flow of reading, dialogue is also very important in a novel to make the flow of events feel more organic, that's my bit of criticism I have for you. I'm dropping the fic at chapter 3, but I like the idea of the fic, so I'll leave it in my library and maybe come back to read more in the future and see if it get's better in the later chapters. Also english is not my first language, so I hope this is understandable
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I think he's saying Rating Game in general, right?
Lord Phenex adds, "I didn't question when you decided to give Ravel your Peerage, but you need to gather pieces to be able to participate in the Rating Game." - Haitch1mthReplied to Swikong
the direct translation of "jujutsu kaisen" is something like "sorcery fight", so calling it magic, sorcery or whatever is all ok.
"I'm Gojo Satoru, the teacher in charge of freshmen at the school of magical techniques." - Haitch5mthReplied to PrimordialDemiurge
Sometimes antagonists don't need to be vilains
Yes, he was that Riser Phenex. - Haitch6mthCommented
Have you thought about how Mahoraga positive energy sword is going to work like?
-Author Note End- - Haitch10mthReplied to StevenWar
According to Remus the number should be around 400, but obviously only the inner circle(around 30 maybe) have the mark.
Commanded an army of dark wizards called 'death eaters'. - Haitch10mthReplied to HuntingFate
If the fantastic beasts are to be considered canon, then Grindewald uses a lightning spell in there too
'Why the hell was this so painful' Harlow complained to himself. He had been on the receiving end of some of his executioners lightning spells, and those were nowhere near as painful! - Haitch11mthCommented
this guy too much into acting like Yugi that he's even cheating
"And now I activate the spell card Bond Between Master of Pupil!" And it seemed Dimitri was far from finished, "This card allows me to special summon a Dark Magician Girl from anywhere in my deck so long as Dark Magician is on the field. And not only that, it allows me to set one of three different spell cards on the field ready to be used at my leisure!" - Haitch1yrReplied to God_of_War25
6 feet = 1.80ish meters
Zhao Feng’s cultivation and Inner Strength were both extremely close to the fifth rank of the Martial Path. Inside his left eye, the green glow had reached 1.55 meters. - Haitch1yrReplied to Jake_Hoyt
the bow* becomes more of a secondary weapon
An arrow left an afterimage in the air, and shot straight into the center of the target fifty meters away. - Haitch1yrReplied to
He does use a bow but still fights mainly with his martial skills and his eye skills, the becomes more of a secondary weapon
An arrow left an afterimage in the air, and shot straight into the center of the target fifty meters away. - Haitch1yrReplied to Jake_Hoyt
I don't know if you already know the answer, so I'll answer it anyway, the "other" eye was dived in 8 and is in some other people possession
Zhao Feng only used half an hour to choose four skills from the hundred books. They were Lightly Floating Ferry, Angry Dragon Fists, Air Pushing Breathing Technique, and Continuous Meteorite Arrows. - Haitch1yrReplied to Reddsaint
It's literally the fruit that made Oda, not use Shiki in the story, because he said it was too strong for the story
But compared with the Float-Float Fruit, which can make itself fly, and permanently float any object, it is not worth mentioning at all. - Haitch1yrReplied to Queen_Karina
the problem with these types of fruits, is that Oda normally nerf them, by making haki able to protect against them
The comprehensive nature of Rumble-Rumble Fruit and the Hollow-Hollow Fruit rule type ability is already outrageous enough! - Haitch1yrReplied to Great_Young_Master
and he lost to BB
"You have to learn to be confident, after all, you are my navigator. What you have to do is not only to keep us safe at sea, but also be my crewmate who can share the pressure with. Whether it's you, Carina or Kuina, you are my most cherished family." - Haitch1yrReplied to Kurogano
well, except for scythe, but that card is simply something that should be banned
Not to mention there was apparently a whole archetype around one of the cards and fusions he got from Dark Magician Girl, Aleister the Invoker that seemed to be a pretty nasty archetype to duel against. - Haitch1yrReplied to
only for the invoked player to already have invokation in hand
Not to mention there was apparently a whole archetype around one of the cards and fusions he got from Dark Magician Girl, Aleister the Invoker that seemed to be a pretty nasty archetype to duel against. - Haitch1yrReplied to Mr_ZeroDagger07
Is that Arthas or am I trippin?
EL(Drop your Imagination Here.) - Haitch1yrReplied to Kyash3025
Rosemi-sama desu wa
"Would…Naruto-Kun…ever do the same? … no…what am I thinking…so embarrassing!" Hearing it was Azuma, Hinata was also surprised, and Naruto couldn't help but come in her mind, smoke wafting out of her ears the next moment, her face beat red, nearly fainting. - Haitch1yrReplied to Shatu_666
it's because the Japanese kanji used in his title can mean both green and blue
"I'm Might Guy, the noble Blue Beast of Konoha, Achoo!!, ah, sorry I caught a cold"