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Review Detail of JapaOuO in DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex

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JapaOuO
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I'll do the story analysis for now, we're entering the second arc now.... the story itself is well written, but a little rushed! the story is a bit reminiscent of the author *akikan40* and it's the story Riser Phenex isn't a villain.... I believe it was inspired by this story, but if it continues like this it could end up becoming another alternative form of the story * akikan40*

DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex

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Dark_Rider01:
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JapaOuO
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Observation: The story is not bad, but for me the story should change direction a little... for example, instead of the MC going to Sona, he tries to get another woman! as an example he could totally change course and go to Athena from the Greek myth! and hold an intelligence competition and thus gain the support of the Greeks! or even go after Freya

Dark_Rider01
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JapaOuO:Observation: The story is not bad, but for me the story should change direction a little... for example, instead of the MC going to Sona, he tries to get another woman! as an example he could totally change course and go to Athena from the Greek myth! and hold an intelligence competition and thus gain the support of the Greeks! or even go after Freya
Gambit_bandit
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why would he go to a whole other faction to get a girl, seemes pretty unnecessary

JapaOuO:Observation: The story is not bad, but for me the story should change direction a little... for example, instead of the MC going to Sona, he tries to get another woman! as an example he could totally change course and go to Athena from the Greek myth! and hold an intelligence competition and thus gain the support of the Greeks! or even go after Freya
JapaOuO
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It's not unnecessary, he could consolidate his influence abroad!.... and another, I just took this as an example that I thought of at the time, there are many more paths he could follow, and I just mentioned a few.... if he he also wanted to marry Seekvaira Agares, who is one of the heirs on the same level as the Sitri and Gremoy family

Gambit_bandit:why would he go to a whole other faction to get a girl, seemes pretty unnecessary
Dark_Rider01
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Daoist825PDv:
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AlastorGF
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estoy de acuerdo con vos y a la ves no lo estoy, ya que lo de ir a otra facción se sentiría super forzado

JapaOuO:It's not unnecessary, he could consolidate his influence abroad!.... and another, I just took this as an example that I thought of at the time, there are many more paths he could follow, and I just mentioned a few.... if he he also wanted to marry Seekvaira Agares, who is one of the heirs on the same level as the Sitri and Gremoy family
JapaOuO
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What?

AlastorGF:estoy de acuerdo con vos y a la ves no lo estoy, ya que lo de ir a otra facción se sentiría super forzado