MC's character development doesn't work like this. MC isn't even supposed to have emotions. He should just be someone who does everything for his goals. He's like someone who got rid of all his weaknesses. You don't even know the character you wrote. MC is like a 16-year-old teenager. But MC has millions of years of memories, he is a different person than he should be with the memories, experiences and skills he receives from the souls.
LostWizard
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LIKEDo you mean millions of years of memories because he absorbs it from the souls or his own? The ones he obtains from eating souls are more like reading a book, in fact he stopped directly integrating them into his mind long ago and is instead forming a book in his library, containing the persons memories. It would be weird if he got affected by their memories, imagine absorbing someone's soul loving and hating people you have never even met. His own memories might be millions of years old but his mental growth is very slow. For us millions of years might be long but for him its equivalent to a few months and you don't mentally and emotionally growth in such a short time
I welcome constructive critic, suggestions, and questions but the fact that you, a reader, are telling me, the author, that i don't know about my own character is absolute impudence. You talk big but have no actual clue about anything. I suggest you write your own book before giving such nonsense from you
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