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Tupan
TupanLv510mth
2024-05-16 07:04

Good story but it isn’t for me though. The concept is intriguing and i like how you made the mc but the writing is missing something, it feels like it is a summary. It needs more emotion or interactions, I am not sure but it just feels like i am reading a summary of how things happened. I hope you improve with time. Best of luck!

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