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well i wont say much but it is a really good fanfic so please don't drop just because of poor translation . try reading upto atleast ch 80 { troll incident }, and then judge .
Hogwarts : I Have the Holy Father System
One_For_None
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One_For_None:yes , though a little late , the feelings of others will be explained , but the main character only let's his true feelings known towards the end , just a spoiler but he will have a really cute daughter who is definitely not(is) obsessed with her father , and considers her father's happiness the most important thing in the world.
Please use chat gpt to make the translation smoother and tell chat gpt to correcte the chinese translation to level up the translation it will help correct more term
One_For_None:and if i really tell you what happens at the end that will really spoil everything as one can't imagine that ending , I can assure that will not find ending like this in another fanfic , but though things can get a little annoying in the middle but yea
Also you can use chat gpt to just create name for the charctere so it will better for the reader but it better than some translation so good job but it can became better [img=recommend]
Daoist_Empereur:Please use chat gpt to make the translation smoother and tell chat gpt to correcte the chinese translation to level up the translation it will help correct more term
The problem doesn't stem from the story itself; regrettably, it arises from poor translation (or writing?). The idea is acceptable, if not entirely novel (HP + System). Nevertheless, I find it challenging to immerse myself in a story when the initial sentences are disorganized. Numerous online tools are available to assist in translating text or rectifying grammar and writing mistakes, so I urge you to make use of them. Because i was bored this was generated with ChatGPT.
well thanks for being obvious but yea i know there are a lot of means for translation and all , and ch 42 onwards i literally used every means possible for the best translation the original (Chinese there are a lot of words and sentences that don't make sense at all when you translate them ,.
H3adNut:The problem doesn't stem from the story itself; regrettably, it arises from poor translation (or writing?). The idea is acceptable, if not entirely novel (HP + System). Nevertheless, I find it challenging to immerse myself in a story when the initial sentences are disorganized. Numerous online tools are available to assist in translating text or rectifying grammar and writing mistakes, so I urge you to make use of them. Because i was bored this was generated with ChatGPT.
Apologies if Chapter 42 onwards brings improvement; however, by that point, you may have lost 80% of the people reading because they stop before Chapter 42. I understand the challenges with troublesome Chinese terms and sentences to translate; I've had my fair share of Chinese machine translation poison. I only wanted to offer constructive criticism. If you use ChatGPT as an example, you will probably have to edit your prompt so that more meaning behind Chinese terms can be found. But better yet proof read. But enough criticism i hope you continue and have fun with what you do.
One_For_None:well thanks for being obvious but yea i know there are a lot of means for translation and all , and ch 42 onwards i literally used every means possible for the best translation the original (Chinese there are a lot of words and sentences that don't make sense at all when you translate them ,.
i get what you mean , well I am translating and uploading for my own fun , there really is nothing to gain except waste of time .translating and criticism , heck even the power stones given only make it so that the book appears more frequently in the recommendation and nothing else ,I just wanted to share the story nothing else ,If someone leaves , i will definitely be sad but it' is their choice
H3adNut: Apologies if Chapter 42 onwards brings improvement; however, by that point, you may have lost 80% of the people reading because they stop before Chapter 42. I understand the challenges with troublesome Chinese terms and sentences to translate; I've had my fair share of Chinese machine translation poison. I only wanted to offer constructive criticism. If you use ChatGPT as an example, you will probably have to edit your prompt so that more meaning behind Chinese terms can be found. But better yet proof read. But enough criticism i hope you continue and have fun with what you do.
One_For_None:i get what you mean , well I am translating and uploading for my own fun , there really is nothing to gain except waste of time .translating and criticism , heck even the power stones given only make it so that the book appears more frequently in the recommendation and nothing else ,I just wanted to share the story nothing else ,If someone leaves , i will definitely be sad but it' is their choice
yes , though a little late , the feelings of others will be explained , but the main character only let's his true feelings known towards the end , just a spoiler but he will have a really cute daughter who is definitely not(is) obsessed with her father , and considers her father's happiness the most important thing in the world.
Pedro_Santos_3738:I understand not giving spoilers but will there be romance ?
One_For_None:yes , though a little late , the feelings of others will be explained , but the main character only let's his true feelings known towards the end , just a spoiler but he will have a really cute daughter who is definitely not(is) obsessed with her father , and considers her father's happiness the most important thing in the world.
Deathwatch99999:by chance how many chapters where there in the original story and was it completed
One_For_None:around 824 if you include the side stories yesit is completed
I am trying to write a novel. , please try , and give me reviews Thanks a lot for all the support and for reading Name of the novel - Destiny's Conquest
One_For_None:around 824 if you include the side stories yesit is completed
I am trying to write a novel. , please try , and give me reviews Thanks a lot for all the support and for reading Name of the novel - Destiny's Conquest
Deathwatch99999:by chance how many chapters where there in the original story and was it completed