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Pacardic
PacardicLv41yr
2024-05-03 18:22

Author spends too much time waxing poetry rather than progressing the story and it gets obnoxious. Especially when topics are rehashed in the next chapter or so, just with a slightly different blend of poetry. This isn’t inherently obnoxious, but it drags on to the point of obscene. Normally I would just move on but every other aspect of the fic shows great promise.

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