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Annabelle_Watson
Annabelle_WatsonModerator1yr
2024-02-15 23:19

The Novel has a promising plot with likable characters. They feel lifelike. someone you could relate with. The use of real-world locations makes imagining the story better. Although it's not perfect but still I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

Seven Nation Army

Captain_Sadistic
4.7
101 Chs

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Christopher_6069
Christopher_6069Lv2

unfortunately, likable characters resulted in the story being on hiatus, with only 16 fans and less than 30k views. maybe it's a good idea to drop or minimize character development and add some math. i hope it will be revived with my suggestions.

8mth
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Captain_Sadistic
Captain_SadisticAuthor

Thanks for your opinion. I'll be continuing the story with volume - 03 in a month. I'll keep in mind your pieces of advice.

Christopher_6069:unfortunately, likable characters resulted in the story being on hiatus, with only 16 fans and less than 30k views. maybe it's a good idea to drop or minimize character development and add some math. i hope it will be revived with my suggestions.
8mth
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Captain_Sadistic
Captain_SadisticAuthor

I just want to tell who ever read it the story writing in the few chapters might not be that good but after chapter eight it has improve a lot and will be keep improving in the future chapters. I'm a non English speaking person so please bare with me for just a few chapters

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Yuno_Jiro
Yuno_JiroLv12

Good book that has a ton of references from the author's past along with the city or country they're probably from. You can tell that they wanted to create a strong bond amongst the characters, despite them being separated for a long time and I think I like that the most about this book. 9.4/10. Great read, be sure to thank the author in the comments!✨

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Faxter
FaxterLv1

Interesting characters and a fantastic story. Loved it as far as I have read. I do hope to read more in the future, and love the originality it packs!

3mth
Captain_Sadistic
Captain_SadisticAuthor

A shameless Author review if you have any suggestions for this story you can suggest me here and if you have any questions or there's some mistakes you think I have made you can also show it here

8mth
Yui_Kanegawa
Yui_KanegawaLv1

The story has potential, it lacks a lot of correction and editing work, not so much because it is poorly written and the line of action cannot be followed, but because it detracts from the rest of the positive things such as the plot. Perhaps lengthening the chapters a little more by introducing some more situational descriptions would also enrich the text. Good job

11mth
Ghost_42069
Ghost_42069Lv1

The backstory is really interesting. The character's too feel relatable. Volume-01 had so many good moments I don't know where to even start. Looking forward to volume-02.

11mth
Sad_kid_reporting
Sad_kid_reportingLv1

This story is pretty good. Even though it has a few grammatical errors but they aren't so bad that it stops you from enjoying the story. The character, the world, the plot, everything's really great.

11mth
LAZYHEAD
LAZYHEADLv4

Personally, it has a good plot and strangely it has a similar problem to my novel which is grammatical errors, nevertheless, it's good looking forward for more chapters

11mth
Seam_Sami
Seam_SamiLv1

My friend is writing the story. I can't believe that it's his 1st time writing a story. for real man, you're great. I mean it's not even your 1st language. Good job man.

11mth
Koyomi_Hashiyama
Koyomi_HashiyamaLv1

The story has a pretty good plot. The 1st few chapters were a little rough around the edges and short but after chapter 16 or so the quality of the story suddenly jumps up. Looking forward to volume 02

11mth
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