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Seam_Sami
Seam_SamiLv19mth
2024-03-12 23:03

My friend is writing the story. I can't believe that it's his 1st time writing a story. for real man, you're great. I mean it's not even your 1st language. Good job man.

Seven Nation Army

Captain_Sadistic
4.7
87 Chs

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Captain_Sadistic
Captain_SadisticAuthor

I just want to tell who ever read it the story writing in the few chapters might not be that good but after chapter eight it has improve a lot and will be keep improving in the future chapters. I'm a non English speaking person so please bare with me for just a few chapters

6mth

Yuno_Jiro
Yuno_JiroLv12

Good book that has a ton of references from the author's past along with the city or country they're probably from. You can tell that they wanted to create a strong bond amongst the characters, despite them being separated for a long time and I think I like that the most about this book. 9.4/10. Great read, be sure to thank the author in the comments!✨

5mth
Faxter
FaxterLv1

Interesting characters and a fantastic story. Loved it as far as I have read. I do hope to read more in the future, and love the originality it packs!

1mth
Captain_Sadistic
Captain_SadisticAuthor

A shameless Author review if you have any suggestions for this story you can suggest me here and if you have any questions or there's some mistakes you think I have made you can also show it here

6mth
Yui_Kanegawa
Yui_KanegawaLv1

The story has potential, it lacks a lot of correction and editing work, not so much because it is poorly written and the line of action cannot be followed, but because it detracts from the rest of the positive things such as the plot. Perhaps lengthening the chapters a little more by introducing some more situational descriptions would also enrich the text. Good job

9mth
Ghost_42069
Ghost_42069Lv1

The backstory is really interesting. The character's too feel relatable. Volume-01 had so many good moments I don't know where to even start. Looking forward to volume-02.

9mth
Sad_kid_reporting
Sad_kid_reportingLv1

This story is pretty good. Even though it has a few grammatical errors but they aren't so bad that it stops you from enjoying the story. The character, the world, the plot, everything's really great.

9mth
LAZYHEAD
LAZYHEADLv4

Personally, it has a good plot and strangely it has a similar problem to my novel which is grammatical errors, nevertheless, it's good looking forward for more chapters

9mth
Koyomi_Hashiyama
Koyomi_HashiyamaLv1

The story has a pretty good plot. The 1st few chapters were a little rough around the edges and short but after chapter 16 or so the quality of the story suddenly jumps up. Looking forward to volume 02

9mth
Aryan426
Aryan426Lv1

Pretty cool. Ilike the characters and the plot. Both are really cool. This novel has a lot of potential so i'm looking forward to reading it more

10mth
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